State of Bliss

I found my love in a twisted haste
As we fell in love I saw my fate
Eleven days was all it took
To write our love story in a book

We have married with no delay
We made our vow in a sunny day
Children came along the way
To keep up with life, so they say

Your actions planted in my mind
Love for me you could never find
I hate to admit but it is true
All in me are feeling blue

Figuring out my days to come
All is left is to be alone
Fixing my sad and shattered heart 
To hide my feelings I have no art

If I could ask a God or star
To be loved it would be by far
The first wish I would ask for
That is all I ask, nothing more

My granted wish is all it takes
To put a smile into my face
Daydream and hope in a roll
In State of Bliss It would be my soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed
Smalls Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Very nice write. Keep writing Daniela!
A   Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:53 AM
DANIELA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Wow, love it...skat
Kovrlija Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Very beautiful and sincere!
Angeja Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:43 PM
Thank you Vesna, best regards!
Falotico Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 3:48 PM
Excellent piece of ones heart in Poetry... Well done and welcome to the Soup!!! hugs and a smile always Michael
Angeja Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Michael, indeed sometimes is difficult to smile, but that is live, with sad and good times! Today I am smiling with all this good comments!
Brown Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:51 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Daniela. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol 09/19/2012
Angeja Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Hi Carol, the sun is shining today! I am reading all this good comments about my writing and it is making me really happy! thank you very much!
Tsiluma Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Lovely write Daniela! You paint with words very well!-even when you tell a sad tale. Nice!very nice!
Angeja Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 1:50 PM
Hi Vicky I paint this words for your eyes to rejoice. I hope I can do the same with other poems. thank you!
Uche O. Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Enjoyed really, a wonderful love story, but at some point the poet mood changed, does it mean that the love put up a new dimension then..... Poetry.
Angeja Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 5:07 PM
Well, if things does not work, even though you tried everything, the only thing left to do is to move on. Yes it is sad, but we have to find a way to be happy. Might be the love of the family or perhaps, if God so wish, to find our real soulmates.
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