Starving

Your vase of flowers
Is eye candy, but my heart
Needs a full course meal


6/28/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:22 PM
nice witty punchline! Light & Love
Neels Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Susan this made me smile ;-) Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest (",)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Congrats Susan on your third place win with this deeply intense creative poetry luv..enjoy..
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 10:36 PM
This is one that I think many women will relate to. (not me of course, since I don't ever get flowers. hahaha) I really like it, Susan.
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