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Starting Squares

Starting Squares

1, 2, 3,
Blocks unfurl,
A, B, C,

Wrapped nicely
neath hued swirl
Blue Spruce tree,

For every
boy or girl
learn gladly.

2019 December 21

*4th Place*

Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas
~~Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 12/31/2019 10:22:00 PM Wow, I can't imagine how it would feel for such a beautiful structure to come falling down so fast. Your entry is so unique William. I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 12/31/2019 10:25:00 PM Hau'oli Makahiki Hou to you and your ohana and mahalo nui for your kind mana'o~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/29/2019 1:00:00 PM - Congratulations on your great winning poem, William :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 12/29/2019 1:05:00 PM Cheers to a New Year to you and your family Anne-Lise and thanks indeed! ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus Date: 12/29/2019 11:42:00 AM This is rather different from the other entries, William! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 12/29/2019 11:46:00 AM Many thanks, Paul and have a Happy New Year to you and your family ~ Aloha always William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/28/2019 3:06:00 PM This one is so charming, William, a poem about a gift of learning!! Congrats for your win and thanks for entering. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 12/28/2019 3:09:00 PM Many thanks for both my placement and the early heads up blog ~ Aloha always William

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/22/2019 7:24:00 AM Very clever poem--splendidly done, William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 12/22/2019 11:12:00 AM Many thanks for your thoughtful share Vijay ~ Aloha always William