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Starting Squares 1, 2, 3, Blocks unfurl, A, B, C, Wrapped nicely neath hued swirl Blue Spruce tree, For every boy or girl learn gladly. 2019 December 21 *4th Place* Have a Merry 3-Cubed Christmas ~~Andrea Dietrich

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 10:22:00 PM

Wow, I can't imagine how it would feel for such a beautiful structure to come falling down so fast. Your entry is so unique William. I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your win! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/31/2019 10:25:00 PM

Hau'oli Makahiki Hou to you and your ohana and mahalo nui for your kind mana'o~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2019 1:00:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning poem, William :) - Happy New Year ... with new poems and new contests ... new chances and new ideas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/29/2019 1:05:00 PM

Cheers to a New Year to you and your family Anne-Lise and thanks indeed! ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2019 11:42:00 AM

This is rather different from the other entries, William! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/29/2019 11:46:00 AM

Many thanks, Paul and have a Happy New Year to you and your family ~ Aloha always William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 3:06:00 PM

This one is so charming, William, a poem about a gift of learning!! Congrats for your win and thanks for entering.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/28/2019 3:09:00 PM

Many thanks for both my placement and the early heads up blog ~ Aloha always William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/22/2019 7:24:00 AM

Very clever poem--splendidly done, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/22/2019 11:12:00 AM

Many thanks for your thoughtful share Vijay ~ Aloha always William