Starting Over

The bird sheds the feathers,
    of Autumn's pain
Welcoming winter,
    with open wings
Scents change,
    with the new breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 8:37 PM
Another superb write, Arastu. Your image of the bird shedding feathers of seasonal pain is truly inspired. Remember, though, that commas compel your reader to pause. Your creative lines invite a free flow without pauses. Best wishes, Brian
Goyal Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 9:01 PM
Thank you for the wonderful feedback, I will look into this
Sharma  Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 8:48 AM
This poem has the impeccable aura of rejuvenation and transformation, so gorgeously you've conveyed the essence of new beginning with beautiful imageries of the bird!
Goyal Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thanks!
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