Starting Lines

Finish lines are cool but starting lines are better. It's the first moment everyone says, "We're in this together." Whoever finishes first, gloats. Second is envious. Third is sick of bronze. Fourth says, "At least I tried." Fifth is labeled too slow. Sixth is told, "Should've stayed home." No knew what seventh endured just to make into the stadium. And no one wants to take the time to even remember who eighth place was. 

Well, I'm eight. And I've got to tell y'all, y'all were fantastic. I'm so proud of us, but all my finish lines are bitterly lonely. Would you guys do me a favor? Do y'all mind if we start again? 

Most people will say not a chance. But will you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/7/2021 4:44:00 AM
Wow! When I was in boot camp I had to do a run. There was one person who could not pass you or you would be as “out” as if you dropped out yourself. Someone nudged my Company Commander because I kept going. She ran the last lap with me and gave me the Sports flag to carry one week before we graduated. I was dead last then scared and up front. Such are life’s trials. God runs with those who keep going. God bless you, TS! ~
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much. I served also. Thank you for your service. You should out my book. The Why of War: An Unorthodox Soldier's Memoirs. Blessings
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