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'starting Anew'

we’re crossing that line again
there will be no turning back
emotions so tangible
we’re starting anew


08/05/2011

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 5/12/2011 12:34:00 PM

Great write! Best to you in the contest. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/9/2011 11:24:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your innovative writing today Wilma. Hope to be reading more of your poetry very soon. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 5/9/2011 11:07:00 AM

Ohh THIS IS EXCELLENT!!You are an expert of these small verses---kash

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2011 8:52:00 AM

It takes courage to cross the line when you know you can't turn back. I hope all of the emotions you experience together are happy ones. Lovely poem, Wilma! Thanks so much for writing this morning. Always great to hear from you. Enjoy that cooler weather -- I'd gladly trade places with you as it's still morning and already 86 degrees here. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 5/9/2011 8:09:00 AM

There's nothing better than a clean slate : ) Lovely piece, Wilma

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/9/2011 6:23:00 AM

A great decision made on the spur of the moment, Wilma

James Peranteau

Date: 5/9/2011 3:56:00 AM

What a great write dear poet ! This write just flows so well, you have done a fantastic job here Wilma! Have a wonderful week my Soup friend...much love, james

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/8/2011 11:20:00 PM

Interesting form and content, Wilma! Good luck with starting anew! Best wishes, Caroline

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2011 10:13:00 PM

Good dodoitsu, Wilma. How was your day? Do they have Mother's DAy where you are?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/8/2011 6:46:00 PM

When emotions lead .. we must follow the path .. wonderful expressive words Wilma.. a delight to read on this sunny beach ... am having such a super time..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/8/2011 6:14:00 PM

cool poem Wilma. sounds hot and heavy...well at least heavy! Enjoyed your comments and I do appreciate them. I've been just fine thanks for asking Love,, How about with y'all?