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Started With a Blade

It all started with a blade To be given for protection Under the sky that began to fade Not to go in the wrong direction To be given for protection On the day of may Not to go in the wrong direction Still decided to go astray On the day of may She took what wasn't hers Still decided to go astray Drank till everything was a blur She took what wasn't hers Under the sky that began to fade Drank till everything was a blur It all started with a blade 22/3/2016

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Date: 4/7/2016 2:47:00 PM
Hi Phoenix, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thxs Mike :)
Date: 4/6/2016 9:59:00 PM
Phoenix, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thank you Linda :)
Date: 4/5/2016 5:28:00 AM
Great work Phoenix .. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thank you
Date: 4/4/2016 8:48:00 PM
Depth has its reward, congratulations Phoenix...
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
thxs :)
Date: 4/4/2016 4:51:00 PM
such a deep and sad write Phoenix congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
thank you Jan :)
Date: 3/23/2016 3:08:00 PM
amazing work!
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Ashley Evans
Date: 5/26/2016 11:01:00 PM
very welcome hun :)
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 3/23/2016 3:14:00 PM
thank you Ashley :)

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