Phoenix Szentesi Poet Pantoum

Started With a Blade

It all started with a blade
To be given for protection 
Under the sky that began to fade 
Not to go in the wrong direction 

To be given for protection
On the day of may
Not to go in the wrong direction 
Still decided to go astray 

On the day of may
She took what wasn't hers
Still decided to go astray
Drank till everything was a blur

She took what wasn't hers
Under the sky that began to fade
Drank till everything was a blur
It all started with a blade


22/3/2016

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Vladislav Raven April 7, 2016 at 2:47 PM Hi Phoenix, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike. Phoenix Szentesi April 7, 2016 at 4:24 PM thxs Mike :)

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 9:59 PM Phoenix, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~ Phoenix Szentesi April 7, 2016 at 4:24 PM thank you Linda :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 5, 2016 at 5:28 AM Great work Phoenix .. no wonder top podium.. big congrats! Phoenix Szentesi April 7, 2016 at 4:24 PM thank you

Charlie Smith April 4, 2016 at 8:48 PM Depth has its reward, congratulations Phoenix... Phoenix Szentesi April 7, 2016 at 4:23 PM thxs :)

Jan Allison April 4, 2016 at 4:51 PM such a deep and sad write Phoenix congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Phoenix Szentesi April 7, 2016 at 4:23 PM thank you Jan :)

Ashley Evans March 23, 2016 at 3:08 PM amazing work! Ashley Evans May 26, 2016 at 11:01 PM very welcome hun :) Phoenix Szentesi March 23, 2016 at 3:14 PM thank you Ashley :)