Started With a Blade

It all started with a blade
To be given for protection 
Under the sky that began to fade 
Not to go in the wrong direction 

To be given for protection
On the day of may
Not to go in the wrong direction 
Still decided to go astray 

On the day of may
She took what wasn't hers
Still decided to go astray
Drank till everything was a blur

She took what wasn't hers
Under the sky that began to fade
Drank till everything was a blur
It all started with a blade


22/3/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/7/2016 2:47:00 PM
Hi Phoenix, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thxs Mike :)
Date: 4/6/2016 9:59:00 PM
Phoenix, Congrats on your "Pantoum --Poet's Choice Win." ~LINDA~
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thank you Linda :)
Date: 4/5/2016 5:28:00 AM
Great work Phoenix .. no wonder top podium.. big congrats!
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Date: 4/7/2016 4:24:00 PM
thank you
Date: 4/4/2016 8:48:00 PM
Depth has its reward, congratulations Phoenix...
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
thxs :)
Date: 4/4/2016 4:51:00 PM
such a deep and sad write Phoenix congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 4/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
thank you Jan :)
Date: 3/23/2016 3:08:00 PM
amazing work!
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Ashley Evans
Date: 5/26/2016 11:01:00 PM
very welcome hun :)
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Phoenix Szentesi
Date: 3/23/2016 3:14:00 PM
thank you Ashley :)
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