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The little girl loves rubbing me, I love giving her kisses when we have tea. She has this bowl of four new friends, goldfish cannot go out to play even on weekends. She spends way too much time with this bowl of water, these four goldfish need to play with a sea otter. Has she forgotten about me her kissing cat, I even let her dress me up in a crazy polka dotted hat. Today as I stare into the fish bowl, I wondered if I could replace them with four pieces of coal.

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2023 8:22:00 PM

Congratulations on this cute poem, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2023 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun/cute write. I hope it gave you a smile. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a great day.............................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/24/2023 8:24:00 AM

"2 Place" ~ Start Jamming ~ Date Written:7/5/2023

Len Gasun

Date: 7/24/2023 4:27:00 AM

Wow! So creative and amazing. I love all the thoughts and talks of the cat to her four friends. So adorable! You created a huggable and smart cat in a story. I enjoyed immensely and the ending made me smile. Congratulations on your win my dear poet friend Paula! Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/24/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for your note, for your congratulations and for your very kind words. We had to pick one picture. I picked the bowl of goldfish with a cat looking into the top of the bowl of water. Then the story came to me. Glad you enjoyed my fun write and that it gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. They are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a great day.............................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/5/2023 12:31:00 PM

Start Jamming~Date Written:7/5/2023