Starstruck

First there was fireworks then there was stars couldn't think of anything else but her smile. stars struck stars and all I can see is the glow of her beauty; with rain instead of sunshine it was all so divine rhyme scheme: abcbdeff date submitted: 7/30/16

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/2/2016 1:17:00 PM

Johnny,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Eve Roper

Date: 8/2/2016 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Johnny, thank you for entering and welcome to soup. Hugs Eve

Jonny Sance
Date: 8/13/2016 12:40:00 AM

...i won something...? ??

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2016 1:54:00 AM

Jonny,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**