Diana-Marie Bombardieri Poet Haiku

Stars-Sky

Always amongst friends
Stars illuminate a way
thankful for family

Alone and dejected
Sky lost in its own vastness 
no one to turn to

When the lights go out
Stars blanket the forlorn Sky
humming a soft tune

Written by: Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 22, 2012
Contest: HODGEPODGE HAIKU for Linda-Marie

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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 28, 2012 at 7:33 AM I love this poem greatly especially the part when you wrote the following: When the lights go out Stars blanket the forlorn Sky humming a soft tune Great job.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2012 at 12:37 PM Well done,Haiku Diana-Marie. -oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A January 22, 2012 at 9:41 PM Diana, enjoyed your entry for Linda's haiku contest.. good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Robert Pettit January 22, 2012 at 3:33 PM A good set of haiku for Linda-Marie's contest.