Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Star-Shine

Twinkle twinkle little star. How bright and beautiful you are!

Bring what I’ve been dreaming of - Your sweet and everlasting love!

I need the warmth of your caress - Come light my night with tenderness.

Darling man, come dazzle me! Your star-shine smile I long to see.

Come to me by moonlight, Dear. Our time is now, and I am here.<>

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Edward Ibeh May 4, 2020 at 5:57 PM Good morning star-shine, Earth says hello!...lol I love this poem, Andrea:-) Congrats on your win!

John Watt May 4, 2020 at 9:32 AM Your nature/romance poems always dazzle, Andrea. Congratulations!

Gideon Idudje May 4, 2020 at 4:17 AM Tantalizing And loving Feel like Over and over Again Weldon S.R

Eve Roper May 11, 2015 at 3:20 PM Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3

Barbara Gorelick May 11, 2015 at 1:53 PM Just wonderful,, I'm glad it made the top of the heap. BG

Sandra Haight May 11, 2015 at 8:23 AM Lovely take on the theme, Andrea. Congratulations on your top win! Sandra

Poet Destroyer A May 9, 2015 at 7:52 PM Andrea, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~

Skat A May 9, 2015 at 6:39 PM Andrea, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE

Jan Allison May 9, 2015 at 3:25 PM Love this romantic write - many congrats Andrea:-)hugs Jan xx

Kelly Deschler May 9, 2015 at 12:25 PM I loved this wonderful, romantic take on the contest theme. Congrats on a first place win, Andrea!

Phyllis Babcock September 23, 2013 at 9:21 PM A little sizzle to this poem. Off to bed as I am tired. Did a lot of laundry today. Wanted to catch up on some of your poems. love phyl

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu September 4, 2013 at 9:42 AM Passionate this is.

Karen Anglesey September 1, 2013 at 8:29 PM A dazzling read both ways. Congratulations on your win :)

Richard D Seal September 1, 2013 at 6:52 PM This is an invite no man could resist Petal, I see congrats are in order once again, soooo Congratulations. Take care, Richard

Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2013 at 6:01 PM It reads so well both ways Congrad's Andie! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud August 29, 2013 at 11:35 PM a glowing gem, andie...you leave me starry-eyed!...congrats on your win!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2013 at 11:03 AM This is one of the better ones..Enjoyed reading your winning work.Congrats ..Sara

Andrew Crisci August 29, 2013 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your big win, Andrea. It a very sweet poem written with a romantic heart. The rhymed lines flow smoothly while I hear their delightful sound. Enjoy your victory. Best wishes, Peace & Love, Andrew.

Poet Destroyer A August 28, 2013 at 9:15 AM Hello, Andrea, love it love it.... congrats with your awesome write...Linda

Richard Lamoureux August 28, 2013 at 7:24 AM A fantastic piece in either direction. Congrats Andrea.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 28, 2013 at 6:49 AM many congrats on your well persevered win Andy. I guess mine was not 'approx' enough lol, never mind we live to fight another day xx

Sandra Adams August 27, 2013 at 6:25 PM what a lovely poem....congrats on your win!

Danesh Morgan August 27, 2013 at 6:21 PM Congrats to you on your win. Morgan its bright

Donna Jones August 27, 2013 at 4:12 PM Congratulations Andrea....starshine smile.....ahhhhh

Joseph May August 27, 2013 at 4:00 PM congrats on a fine win Andrea..

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