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Stars Witness

The clock ticks. Fervently my heart beats faster,  Gaze intently at the hushed dark night-sky studded with scintilating stars,  With a glorious full Moon strangely gleaming till the resplendent dawn emerges,  Ardently ponder about the fascinating days We spent together!  Stars, stars, you are inexplicably quiet,  luminous you shine,  Are you going to keep our captivating story Concealed in your hearts,  Although the story is mine!  A truly unique poignant story,  Which only the stars can tell,  The only noiseless witness,  Of love, and passion, of longing and compassion,  Of sadness and deprivation,  Of a miraculous bondage!  Stars blink,  The clock ticks,  My heart bleeds!  First Place For All Yours (February 21) Poetry Contest Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 2/23/2021 5:10:00 AM
Interesting winner. Congrats. Sometimes life feels like the last three lines inanimate and uncaring. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/23/2021 6:27:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, for visiting my poem. Appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Date: 2/21/2021 7:50:00 AM
Malabika very nice. great flow with sadness! congrats on your win!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/21/2021 1:39:00 PM
Thanks, Krish. Really appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Date: 2/21/2021 6:44:00 AM
Mala, what a lovely poem with so many great lines, the ending touched my heart and congrats on your win _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/21/2021 1:38:00 PM
Thanks Constance. So much appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/21/2021 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations dear Mala..So happy to see this enchanting poem on the list of winners..
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Date: 10/22/2020 12:38:00 PM
Hello Mala, my eyes were teary as I read this poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/23/2020 10:10:00 AM
Hello Mala,I agree, you know not all poems are happy. I agree we can not avoid sad poems. Hugs Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/22/2020 3:59:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, for reading the poem. I admit, it's a bit sad , but we can't avoid being sad sometimes. Hugs, Mala
Date: 10/20/2020 11:31:00 AM
Oh this is a sad poem... I've not read many sad poems about stars...
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/20/2020 2:54:00 PM
Sadness probably is the unavoidable part of life. Sorry for making you sad - My next poem has to be a happy one! Thanks for reading.

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