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Stars Stir and Wink

when twilight comes soon the night falls and I lay my head on my pillow while up above the stars sprawl oh, my bedroom curtains billow so, I rise and go to my window and I find myself drifting in the dark sky to see a zillion twinkling stars (but, I didn't know I could fly) and I notice one star stirs oh, I think this is my beloved that lures and then more stars stir and wink at me and I glide and fly that way such a wonderful feeling of carefree until the stars fade into day and back to my bed I go to lay _____________________ April 12, 2021 Poetry/Quintain (English)/Stars Stir and Wink Copyright Protected, ID 04-1346-519-12 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Apr 12) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 04/12/2021 First Place

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Date: 4/14/2021 7:44:00 PM
While reading your poem, I became absorbed. Loved it. Congratulations Janice!
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 4/15/2021 6:21:00 PM
So sorry Constance! Take care.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/14/2021 10:46:00 PM
George, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, I am not Janice but I am sure you meant your comment for me, love _Constance
Date: 4/13/2021 1:42:00 AM
Such a Star studded poem :) Loved it Constance..do take care.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2021 8:45:00 AM
Carol, thanks for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 4/12/2021 6:51:00 PM
You speak to the innocence we all desire to have and hold in our hearts! I love the beautiful childlike quality of your descriptions! Lonna
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Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2021 8:46:00 AM
Lonna, thank you for the beautiful comment, love _Constance
Date: 4/12/2021 2:22:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. This is SO lovely. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 4/13/2021 8:46:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the congrats and the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 4/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
Hello Constance, I love this poem and enjoyed it. It will be my fav. enjoy your day my friend. love. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2021 3:12:00 PM
Hello Constance, you are so welcome my friend. Love Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2021 2:03:00 PM
Darlene, thank you for the compliment and the FAV, love _Constance
Date: 4/12/2021 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful, magical poem, Constance:-) Well-done!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2021 2:04:00 PM
Edward, thank you so much for the compliment, love_Constance
Date: 4/12/2021 2:25:00 AM
just beautiful Quintain (English); I enjoyed really
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Constance La France
Date: 4/12/2021 2:28:00 AM
Mahtab, thank you so much for the compliment, love _Constance

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