Stars On My Pillow



Soft, velour breaths, fill our room.
Ah, your svelte body, makes me swoon. 
Hold me so tight, breathless please?
As I want to wholly die, from your squeeze.


Light the gardenia candle, make shadows dance.
Don’t let them blow out, not a chance!
Sandalwood cream, I shall rub on your back.
Our moments together, always on track.


Close the floral shades, we desire our privacy.
The silent pines, scent us but cannot see.
I shall never forget, magic nights together.
We floated as moonlit feathers, in a land of forever!


                         7/5/2022
                           ~3~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:36 PM
"STARS ON MY PILLOW" is a wonderful/lovely write. A great ending. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend.............
Romios Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:49 PM
I will humbly agree with you, Paula! Glad you liked it! These weekends come and go so fast, wow! I just reread it…it IS good, Panagiota
Roper Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:09 AM
A romantic write, my friend. I don't care how old we get we still need that romance in our lives.
Romios Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 6:44 PM
Indeed we do Eve! We are both grandmothers…. Romantic Grandmothers! How about that…hurrah! Thank you. Panagiota Like that song….”Our Love Is Here to Stay”, right?
Eagle Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 4:25 PM
A wonderful piece like a melody.
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 4:29 PM
Elena…was thinking of that old song, Melody of Love, when you wrote the word, Melody… Love, Panagiota xxx
Slaughter Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 1:52 PM
The epitome of a love poem, Panagiota. Beautiful.
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 4:27 PM
Jim what a high compliment. I am glad to know you. Thank you. Love, Panagiota xxx
Kauffman Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 12:42 PM
Pangie, this poem floats on perfumed wings of romance in serene moonlight. It is written with a subtle touch of delicate love. So beautiful! Thank you for sharing this beautiful scene!
Romios Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Sam, I appreciate you and your comment. I am more than pleased you liked it…. Heartfelt thanks and you are welcome. Love, Panagiota xxx
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