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Stars On My Pillow

Soft, velour breaths, fill our room. Ah, your svelte body, makes me swoon. Hold me so tight, breathless please? As I want to wholly die, from your squeeze. Light the gardenia candle, make shadows dance. Don’t let them blow out, not a chance! Sandalwood cream, I shall rub on your back. Our moments together, always on track. Close the floral shades, we desire our privacy. The silent pines, scent us but cannot see. I shall never forget, magic nights together. We floated as moonlit feathers, in a land of forever! 7/5/2022 ~3~

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Date: 8/5/2022 6:36:00 PM
"STARS ON MY PILLOW" is a wonderful/lovely write. A great ending. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend.............
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/5/2022 6:49:00 PM
I will humbly agree with you, Paula! Glad you liked it! These weekends come and go so fast, wow! I just reread it…it IS good, Panagiota
Date: 7/6/2022 10:09:00 AM
A romantic write, my friend. I don't care how old we get we still need that romance in our lives.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/5/2022 6:44:00 PM
Indeed we do Eve! We are both grandmothers…. Romantic Grandmothers! How about that…hurrah! Thank you. Panagiota Like that song….”Our Love Is Here to Stay”, right?
Date: 7/5/2022 4:25:00 PM
A wonderful piece like a melody.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/5/2022 4:29:00 PM
Elena…was thinking of that old song, Melody of Love, when you wrote the word, Melody… Love, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/5/2022 1:52:00 PM
The epitome of a love poem, Panagiota. Beautiful.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/5/2022 4:27:00 PM
Jim what a high compliment. I am glad to know you. Thank you. Love, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/5/2022 12:42:00 PM
Pangie, this poem floats on perfumed wings of romance in serene moonlight. It is written with a subtle touch of delicate love. So beautiful! Thank you for sharing this beautiful scene!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/5/2022 4:24:00 PM
Sam, I appreciate you and your comment. I am more than pleased you liked it…. Heartfelt thanks and you are welcome. Love, Panagiota xxx

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