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Written 28th March 2025
Each Star Has A Pattern Of Its Own Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose,
Stars are a wondrous sight in the night They are a most dazzling precious light Not only beautifying the sky But guiding the way for you and I. Dancing angels out in aerospace With fineness full of heavenly grace Around the moon scattered stars align In eyes they twinkle, purely divine. Devoid of stars the nights would be dim The man in the moon would lose his grin Alone in the dark, no company No angels singing in harmony. Stars were made as a stunning duo From the all-powerful supremo Starlight and moonlight go hand in hand Beacons that glow on earth's grand bandstand. Each star has a pattern of its own That stays unidentified, unknown They are there for folk to reach out to With a way of making dreams come true.

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Date: 4/9/2025 10:12:00 AM
Beryl, they are amazing to look at, and there are so many of them! A friend of mine was talking about how difficult it is to see them around here due to light pollution. It's hard to imagine how big our universe actually is let alone the galaxy we're part of. It's a refreshing humbling experience to see so many. I think now many have forgotten what they mean. Take care and smiles!!!
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Date: 4/5/2025 7:28:00 AM
HHi sister Beryl, congratulations on your poem making the winner's list, you'll always be a star in my eyes.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 10:10:00 AM
Ah! Thank you brother John, likewise you’ll always be a star in my eyes… Sis Beryl
Date: 4/4/2025 7:21:00 PM
A delightful poem and so imaginative! Congratulations on your win!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 1:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Karen, I’m pleased you like the poem. I’m delighted to be on the winners list, every entry was a marvellous read… Beryl
Date: 4/4/2025 7:07:00 PM
Lovely write dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Date: 4/5/2025 1:41:00 AM
Thank you thriveni, those words mean a lot… Beryl
Date: 4/3/2025 11:06:00 AM
So lovely your words Beryl so much enjoyed reading. A Wish Upon A Star is a wonderful cliche I wrote lyrics to a song Maria Williams did. So nice to read what you have written about the stars...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 1:39:00 AM
Thank you Michael, I did see the video, it’s wonderful and what a treasure it is for you… Beryl
Date: 3/29/2025 6:26:00 AM
Hello Beryl, enjoyed reading your lovely write on the Stars. Beautifully done. In the second stanza, that’s how I think of them. Good luck with that contest my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 12:42:00 AM
Hi Zyrool, I’m so pleased you enjoyed the read.Thank you, Beryl
Date: 3/28/2025 2:12:00 PM
Hot burning orbs of light and delight. Nice take on the theme Beryl
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 12:40:00 AM
Thank you Tom, amazing orbs of light are the stars, wonders from afar… Beryl
Date: 3/28/2025 12:28:00 PM
No better view than a clear night sky Beryl Hope you're both well. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2025 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Tom, the sky at night is pure delight… Beryl

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