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STARS OF CLARITY

Doubts crept Ever slowly Inching up my spine A silent moon Peered From behind Dark clouds A shadow lingered On my soul Temptingly Tantalizing A shudder Cagily Clenched My chest Tore out my heart Held it Before the hidden moon Its thundering longing Beseeching The stars of clarity With a pounding Ferocity The moon Applauding In an awakening Sky

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/5/2023 4:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a wonderful day with your win...............

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2023 2:39:00 PM

Nice one John..congratulations on your placement

Ink Empress

Date: 12/4/2023 3:15:00 AM

I absolutely love the smoothness of this poem and also how it flows with such delicate imagery, so touching how you mentioned “ A silent moon Peered From behind Dark clouds” just love that… so deep and moving. And the rest of the lines too which describes so many poignant and soul hitting thoughts in such a profound manner, truly touched my heart. Loved this, congratulations on your well deserved win.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/23/2023 5:03:00 AM

Wow, John, this poem is metaphorically powerful. I loved the images you used, especially 'its thundering longing beseeching the stars of clarity.' Great contest contender. Best wishes with it. enjoy your day, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/22/2023 6:19:00 PM

Great one-word 'lone-rangers- and phrasal 'dragon-slayers,' John. YOU DA MAN ... ~ Little boy