Fading Star Silence Poet Free verse

Stars of Clarity

As surging frustrations 
prey on neglected hearts 
and jaded minds,
washing away the 
resistance with 
blasphemous tears, 
trickling down upon 
suppressed fears;
I choose myself 
above all wounds 
and wicked souls with 
nefarious intentions, 
whilst drifting 
towards pains of 
hidden crossroads,
paired with 
stars of clarity,
guiding me away from 
repetitive galaxies
bursting with 
sunken astral clusters,
aligned in a 
black hole of apathy. 

When communication 
drowns down, with 
comprehension wasted—
near or far—
struck by sinful scribes of an 
ominous silhouette 
seeking redemption, 
yet upon a star-crossed fate,
I find beauty fraying at the edges, 
expelled by brimming hostility.
Sinister memories of yesterday, 
shape shifts hearts into
strangers in disguise, 
breathing in discontent, 
purging the hate that 
burns deep into my 
flesh and bones, 
where scars—old and new, 
like crestfallen stars;
drift endlessly towards 
its reclusive passing.

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Hiya Sharma December 4, 2023 at 7:39 PM My gosh, dear poetess, I adore your impeccable poetic skills and the artistic way in which you weave emotions so effortlessly! This poem is absolutely well-deserved for the first place win & I can't help but be in awe of how deeply resonating this poignant write is.. I can connect to this in so many dimensions- "purging the hate that burns deep into my flesh and bones, where scars—old and new, like crestfallen stars;", "I choose myself above all wounds and wicked souls with nefarious intentions" Hiya Sharma December 4, 2023 at 7:39 PM Just wowww, keep shining and writing always, dear gorgeous soul! Your quill is so gifted & can enchant anyone's heart..

Silent One December 4, 2023 at 2:25 PM You always amaze me with your poetry and this one is so deserving of first place..

Ink Empress December 4, 2023 at 12:01 AM Ah my beautiful soul sis, do you ever write anything that doesn’t connect to me on so many deep levels? I see you’ve also used alliterations here and such descriptive diction to depict how one who is drowning in darkness choose to rise beyond nefarious intentions of the world. I am in absolute awe of the way you’ve phrased that so poetically in sheer eloquence, i love every word in this and this hits home for me as you speak my soul language. What a touching and powerful take. Congratulations

Nik Canada7 November 23, 2023 at 7:26 AM I love this so much amore?your deep intense show me your depth within your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. You are a rare special being and i will always be by your side being your everything walking hand in hand towards amidst the life storms and gravitational current,illuminanting your soul, feeling your sorrow,my korean princess. mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio. i love you deeply micia ..mia passione per sempre ..tuo..il nostro eterno amore

Silent One November 20, 2023 at 2:12 PM A poem full of emotions and one of angst and the wanting to be free from frustrations.. an excellent poem for this contest, which you have written from deep deep in your heart.

Regina Mcintosh November 20, 2023 at 6:05 AM Intense and intriguing, interesting star studded silhouette of your shining soul. God bless you with a win. Much love, Gina