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Written on November 19, 2023

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Stars of Clarity

The perfect poem goes something like this – Feeling stings, like a bee Quick as a tear Just as abruptly as a star’s glowing A whisper, a sigh, a stirring – Stars of Clarity… What it means to truly see beyond The grief, the longing, the all-consuming Passion! The perfect poem is any poem that bleeds, Not just ink But light, laughter, love Signs of life beneath layers of words!
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 5:15 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative write with a great picture. FAV.... Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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December 4, 2023 at 2:47 PM
congratulations on your placement
Empress Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Dear Gina this is cute and creative how you’ve written for the prompt, i love the way you’ve interpreted it in such a unique manner, thank you for sharing this. Congratulations on your win
Narain Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Beautiful poem. Love it.
Narain Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Beautiful poem. Love it.
Brotherton Avatar
November 19, 2023 at 12:49 PM
Signs of life beneath layers of words. What a perfect description of poetry.
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