Stars of Clarity

On the balcony of a big mansion, a girl with beautiful 
eyes 
Is dancing her favorite dance while looking in the night
 sky
Her dress is floating because of the cold wind that is passing by
While she admired the lonely moon and twinkling stars in the sky

She stopped dancing and remembers the story about Stars of Clarity
This lovely story is told by her very own mother named Dorothy
Its about the treasure that is completely hidden by the Goddess of Night
No one in the whole universe know what treasure is hidden even the Knight

She always wonder why the Goddess of night hide something
She always want to know the reason and the origin of this thing
But there is only one problem and that is she is only a little girl
She will never have a chance to travel and explore it as a girl

Since that day she decided to transform herself to be a respectful knight
She trained very hard just to become the most strongest and skilled knight
Just to fullfill her dream since she is young, to find that hidden treasure
Even though everyone around her think she will not make it, for sure

What do you think will happen to our lovely Knight?
Will she make it, or someone will stop her into a fright 
Who do you think will stop her?, Is it the Goddess of the Night?
Do you think she will know the origin of Stars Of Clarity or it will just be on sight
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December 4, 2023 at 2:44 PM
Great storytelling.. congratulations on your placement
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January 26, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Oh myy thank you tooo sorry for replying only this time.
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December 4, 2023 at 3:21 AM
I was intrigued and hooked from the very first line to read more, i love the storytelling here, so profound and moving. About this character, that you’ve described so very eloquently. I love the story and depth of this, especially “ Since that day she decided to transform herself to be a respectful knight She trained very hard just to become the most strongest and skilled knight“ repetitive rhymes but you’ve made it work so well. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Pleasure reading
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January 26, 2024 at 2:17 AM
Thank you so muchhhhh!!!!! And im thankful you liked it And im really sorry for replying only now.
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