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Stars of Clarity

On the balcony of a big mansion, a girl with beautiful eyes Is dancing her favorite dance while looking in the night sky Her dress is floating because of the cold wind that is passing by While she admired the lonely moon and twinkling stars in the sky She stopped dancing and remembers the story about Stars of Clarity This lovely story is told by her very own mother named Dorothy Its about the treasure that is completely hidden by the Goddess of Night No one in the whole universe know what treasure is hidden even the Knight She always wonder why the Goddess of night hide something She always want to know the reason and the origin of this thing But there is only one problem and that is she is only a little girl She will never have a chance to travel and explore it as a girl Since that day she decided to transform herself to be a respectful knight She trained very hard just to become the most strongest and skilled knight Just to fullfill her dream since she is young, to find that hidden treasure Even though everyone around her think she will not make it, for sure What do you think will happen to our lovely Knight? Will she make it, or someone will stop her into a fright Who do you think will stop her?, Is it the Goddess of the Night? Do you think she will know the origin of Stars Of Clarity or it will just be on sight

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Date: 12/4/2023 2:44:00 PM
Great storytelling.. congratulations on your placement
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Eujeana Sobscollo
Date: 1/26/2024 2:18:00 AM
Oh myy thank you tooo sorry for replying only this time.
Date: 12/4/2023 3:21:00 AM
I was intrigued and hooked from the very first line to read more, i love the storytelling here, so profound and moving. About this character, that you’ve described so very eloquently. I love the story and depth of this, especially “ Since that day she decided to transform herself to be a respectful knight She trained very hard just to become the most strongest and skilled knight“ repetitive rhymes but you’ve made it work so well. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Pleasure reading
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Eujeana Sobscollo
Date: 1/26/2024 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so muchhhhh!!!!! And im thankful you liked it And im really sorry for replying only now.

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