Kim Rodrigues Poet Couplet

Stars In Her Eyes

stars in her eyes, fleeting…her broken heart
like confetti - the century’s storm, smart.

Ben didn’t rush - the Gordian knot tight.
He cuts grief’s umbilical cord - Kate’s knight

pinkens her cheeks, pastes back her smile. the stars -
Kate’s crowd surfing, beyond clouds, above the scars.

7/20/2022
Contest: Bite Size Poem no49
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Paige Hind August 20, 2024 at 4:16 PM Raw- I think you're the genius in this <3

Mike Bayles July 20, 2022 at 8:37 AM Very nice, Rhyme, Kim. Kim Rodrigues July 20, 2022 at 12:33 PM Thanks, Mike!

Victor Buhagiar July 20, 2022 at 8:21 AM To find love is very important. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues July 20, 2022 at 12:33 PM Yes! Hugs ~ Kim

Bill Baker July 20, 2022 at 8:07 AM Glad she came back from her grief. Intriguing couplets, Kim. Good luck in the contest my friend. Have a great week! Bill Kim Rodrigues July 20, 2022 at 12:34 PM Thanks, Friend! Have a blessed week, Bill!