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Stars In Her Eyes

stars in her eyes, fleeting…her broken heart like confetti - the century’s storm, smart. Ben didn’t rush - the Gordian knot tight. He cuts grief’s umbilical cord - Kate’s knight pinkens her cheeks, pastes back her smile. the stars - Kate’s crowd surfing, beyond clouds, above the scars. 7/20/2022 Contest: Bite Size Poem no49 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 8/20/2024 4:16:00 PM
Raw- I think you're the genius in this <3
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:37:00 AM
Very nice, Rhyme, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2022 12:33:00 PM
Thanks, Mike!
Date: 7/20/2022 8:21:00 AM
To find love is very important. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2022 12:33:00 PM
Yes! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/20/2022 8:07:00 AM
Glad she came back from her grief. Intriguing couplets, Kim. Good luck in the contest my friend. Have a great week! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/20/2022 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Friend! Have a blessed week, Bill!

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