Mohammad Yamin Poet Rhyme

Stars Go To Sleep

Stars! Why be awake with me
Hit the bed and go to sleep
You are not enslaved by agony but free
My bleeding soul’s wounds are deep

Through my open window you peep
With your twinkling searching eyes
Your glow in my gloomy nights creep
With the grace of the fireflies

Someone gifted me sleeplessness
And  rewarded me with anguish
My nights darkness and gloom dress
Like out of water fish I languish

Why be overly worried for me
A day may return my deserted sleep
Setting from the bondage my soul free
When that happens you must not weep.

Stars! I beseech go to sleep!

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M.I.A . January 15, 2012 at 6:32 PM so much passion in this conversation-like-dream words, sir. The desperation becomes beautiful till the end. Thank you for your visit and kind comments. Looking forward to read more of your wonderful poems. Mohammad Yamin January 16, 2012 at 11:44 AM Thanks for your kind words, mia. Do read my other poems. I am sure they will not disappoint your high degree of sensitivity. -Mohammad

Maureen Lefanue December 28, 2011 at 1:04 PM Hi Mohammed, Thank you for your kind comment regarding my poem. I read a few of your poems and really enjoyed them. I do enjoy rhyme and your choice of words is excellent. Cheers, Maureen

Debbie Guzzi March 24, 2011 at 9:44 AM such a nice write, I bet you could write a good one with rhyme INSIDE of a line, kinda like your "You are not enslaved by AGONY but FREE" this could be seen as internal half rhyme [repeating the long E sound] Please consider entering my contest The Rhyme Inside..Light & Love

Robb A. Kopp March 23, 2011 at 10:59 AM another instant masterpiece!

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2011 at 1:23 PM Great one ...I get that feeling some on those sleepless nights..Congratulations..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown March 9, 2011 at 3:09 AM Congratulations on your poetry making through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Mohammad. Love Carol

Syed Amaan Ahmad March 8, 2011 at 1:51 AM Good stuff, congrats!

James Fraser February 13, 2011 at 11:29 AM Many congratulations Mohammad on this fine piece being featured, deservedly so. Many thank you's for your always kind words on my poems....:)

Vince Suzadail Jr. February 2, 2011 at 3:45 PM Congrats Mohammad on "Stars Go To Sleep" being featured. Vince

Carole Cookie Arnold January 20, 2011 at 11:02 AM Well Done I have always seen a starry night, within the walls of my sorrow, as heavens angels smiling on my weary soul Love Cookie

John Loving Iii January 19, 2011 at 9:09 AM well writen and thought of. i liked most of the images that you associated with sleep. good job. John H Loving III

November 13, 2010 at 12:52 PM Nice use of rhyme to share your thoughts. The emotion comes through your words. You made my day with your kind comment on my poem. Thank you so much. Wishing you life's best. Karen

Mohammad Taha Effendi October 20, 2010 at 12:11 PM brilliant beautiful write! love it. thank you for your comments on my poem. best wishes, Taha

Monica Evette September 19, 2010 at 11:48 AM I might try looking at the stars next time I can't sleep. I usually stare at the ceiling. Torture long sleepless nights. Well done beautifully done. Thank you Monica

Skat A July 24, 2010 at 10:52 PM NICE ONE, ENJOYED YOUR THE READ -SKAT