Stars

Stars

                            Flickered

                             Timidly 

                         Before setting 

                                Sun!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
    18 November 2017

1,2,3,4,1.

*Back for today.

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Susan Ashley

November 24, 2017 at 7:37 PM

Demetrios, your celestial imagery is a sensational joy to read and your photo is quite stunning!

Ravi Sathasivam

November 23, 2017 at 3:05 AM

Excellent. Lovely imagery write. Thanks for sharing it.

Alexis Y.

November 23, 2017 at 1:37 AM

Hi Demetrios, You have painted a beautiful picture with words my wise friend. And what I see is beautiful. Happy Holidays To You And Your Loved Ones. Thanks for sharing:-) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

November 21, 2017 at 8:26 AM

Wow! I enjoy reading you anytime, Demetrios:) you have a sweet way with words:)

Maria Williams

November 19, 2017 at 12:15 AM

What a lovely way of putting it. I can just imagine them winking on and off. Beautifully expressed dearest Demetrios...Maria xxx

Silent One

November 18, 2017 at 11:46 AM

Lovely imagery in such a short form.. Well expressed my friend..

Russell Sivey

November 18, 2017 at 10:26 AM

Wow, this is a very heartwarming write, full of a remarkable realization that life within the eyes of the stars still twinkle before the sun's dominate stance! I really loved reading your delightful Lanterne! You have amazed me this morning by your ingenious work here! Great job!!