Stars

He’s beautiful. Laying across from me, Eyes a confused green. I know his skin is soft Because in one moment, He placed a coin in my palm, And I had the Overwhelming desire To run my fingers Through his hair and I know I can’t help myself My hopeless romantic Tendencies have Taken ahold of me. And him, he’s just Simplistically hopeful And so am I. I can see the good in him And he sees the good in me. And I think, I don't know but I want to I think Hidden in the dark, We could outshine the Stars.

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Lewis Raynes

Date: 2/5/2018 9:28:00 PM

such an intimate write Iris, a fav for sure. :)

Iris Blade
Date: 2/5/2018 10:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Lewis!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2018 3:38:00 PM

such a beautiful romantic poem Iris:-) hugs Jan xx

Iris Blade
Date: 1/30/2018 3:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan!

Chris Green

Date: 11/29/2017 11:01:00 AM

And you already know this is one of my faves

Iris Blade
Date: 11/29/2017 12:13:00 PM

Yes, and I'm glad I do.

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2017 1:09:00 PM

Very romantic, its like you were describing your true love.. so perfect..

Iris Blade
Date: 11/8/2017 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, and maybe I am. Who knows?

Chris Green

Date: 11/8/2017 6:16:00 AM

Love is such a magical thing, I have no doubt that you and your special someone could outshine anything. What a beautiful, heart touching poem that really made me smile this morning,. I am a big fan of your style.

Iris Blade
Date: 11/8/2017 11:50:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris! I'm glad I made you smile. And I am not entirely sure what exactly my style is! Yes, I do hope he and I will be able to shine. Have a nice day Chris.