Stars

Our love is about
Two stars who belong
To different constellations
Worth-reading,
Worth-telling,
Worth-sharing,
To the world
Watching us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Juman Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 8:22 PM
Sorry brother-- I am still trying to get it
Makama Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Oh my goodness! This is why I always miss your work when I stay away from this site for a while. Your choice of words and perfect blend of a cute message is beyond description. This is definitely good..
Neumann Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 10:46 AM
I like that. Stars and sharing, hey? This is good. Kai
Parmale Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Lovely write my friend...
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:45 AM
Lovely metaphor, Hansteven.
Hoffman Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Short and to the point very nice love poem Hans!:)
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