Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Verse

Stars

Apparent Horizon,
             The Twinkling stars walk over,
                To kiss their darling earth,
                  Universe celebrates!

                   Longing for beloved 
               My dazzling brightest star,
               His incandescence enthrals,
                    Dance to serenity !






Written on 16/6/14
By Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Contest- Shine with your NAANI
Sponsor- Nette onclaud


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Hija De La Luna July 25, 2014 at 8:31 PM love this write, Dr. Upma!

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 3:45 PM Dr Upma :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri July 18, 2014 at 2:06 AM A shining stellar poem. And congrats on yor nice win too. Warm regards Doc. Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:12 AM Thnx Zaynub !

Saba Khan July 17, 2014 at 6:59 AM Great win..Congrats :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:12 AM Thnx Saba!

Robert Lindley July 16, 2014 at 9:40 PM A brilliant write and a great win my friend!! Big congrats!!! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:11 AM Thnx Robert ! Appreciate ur visits n wishes my dear friend!

Arlene Smith July 16, 2014 at 9:06 PM Congrats on a Great win, dear Upma! Hugs.. Arlene Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:10 AM Thnx Arlene my dear friend!

Paul Callus July 16, 2014 at 6:26 PM Hi Upma! I've commented on this one before when it turned out to be a winner; now it's once again on the winners' list, so applause for the second time!! congratulations:) // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:10 AM Thnx Paul ! I always crave for an applaud from u,, appreciate ur visits n lovely comments!

Poet Destroyer A July 16, 2014 at 5:56 PM nice win.>PD Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 18, 2014 at 2:08 AM Thnx PD

Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2014 at 10:09 AM Dr Upma, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 4, 2014 at 10:23 AM Thnx Linda !

Frederic Parker July 1, 2014 at 5:41 PM Congratulation on your well deserved win Dr Upma Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 4, 2014 at 10:22 AM Thnx Frederic ! An honour to hear from u!

Nette Onclaud July 1, 2014 at 4:00 PM this sparkling write just grabbed me, dr. upma... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 4, 2014 at 10:21 AM Thnx Nette ! It's an honour to shine in ur contest,, ur contests r unique !

Pandita Sietesantos July 1, 2014 at 1:26 PM Hi Dr. Upma- Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write! Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2014 at 1:38 PM Thanks Pandita for ur lovely wishes!

Paul Callus July 1, 2014 at 11:49 AM I love the imagery that shines in this poem, Upma. Congrats on a fine win. // paul Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2014 at 1:37 PM Thanks Paul for ur visits n ur lovely wishes// Upma//

Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2014 at 10:33 AM Beautiful imagery creating an absorbing picture, Dr. Upma, congrats on the win Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 1, 2014 at 1:35 PM Thnx Dr Ram for ur lovely words n wishes!

Nette Onclaud June 17, 2014 at 2:14 PM thanks, dr. upma.. we need 25 syllables per stanza.. can we work on this?.. nice!.. huggs Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 18, 2014 at 7:45 AM Thanks Nette ! I had construed it wrong ,, I thot upto 25 syl n not exactly 25 ,,, appreciate valuable feedback ! I hv worked on this,, trust it's upto the mark now !

Carolyn Devonshire June 16, 2014 at 5:11 PM What a beautiful, upbeat poem, Dr. Upma! I am not familiar with this form, but I love the images you create with the twinkling stars kissing earth and the "Dance to serenity!" Just yesterday I was chatting with a Souper about people whose native languages are not English, but they still provide extraordinary work. You were the first one I thought of, dear. Love, Carolyn Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 16, 2014 at 8:18 PM Thnx Carolyn ! Haven't ever felt that English was a foreign language ,, coz right from grade one , all curricula in eng ,, I hv written much in my native language as well ,, that's Hindi ,,, and few of shayari in Urdu too,, // Upma // love to hv ur comments always !!

Aiyah Torres June 16, 2014 at 3:32 PM beautiful and yes.. so sweet!!! ...well done, Dr. Upma!! :O)) Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 16, 2014 at 8:13 PM Thnx Aiyah !

Casarah Nance June 16, 2014 at 3:07 PM aww sweet :) Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 16, 2014 at 8:13 PM Thnx dear !