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Stars

Apparent Horizon, The Twinkling stars walk over, To kiss their darling earth, Universe celebrates! Longing for beloved My dazzling brightest star, His incandescence enthrals, Dance to serenity ! Written on 16/6/14 By Dr. Upma A. Sharma Contest- Shine with your NAANI Sponsor- Nette onclaud Ranked 5th Now for contest- Poem of the week #9 Sponsor- PD A Ranked 8th

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Hija De La Luna

Date: 7/25/2014 8:31:00 PM

love this write, Dr. Upma!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 3:45:00 PM

Dr Upma :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/18/2014 2:06:00 AM

A shining stellar poem. And congrats on yor nice win too. Warm regards Doc.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:12:00 AM

Thnx Zaynub !

Saba Khan

Date: 7/17/2014 6:59:00 AM

Great win..Congrats :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:12:00 AM

Thnx Saba!

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2014 9:40:00 PM

A brilliant write and a great win my friend!! Big congrats!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:11:00 AM

Thnx Robert ! Appreciate ur visits n wishes my dear friend!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/16/2014 9:06:00 PM

Congrats on a Great win, dear Upma! Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:10:00 AM

Thnx Arlene my dear friend!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/16/2014 6:26:00 PM

Hi Upma! I've commented on this one before when it turned out to be a winner; now it's once again on the winners' list, so applause for the second time!! congratulations:) // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:10:00 AM

Thnx Paul ! I always crave for an applaud from u,, appreciate ur visits n lovely comments!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2014 5:56:00 PM

nice win.>PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:08:00 AM

Thnx PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2014 10:09:00 AM

Dr Upma, Congratulations, in Nette's " SHINE WITH YOUR NAANI!!" Contest :) LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/4/2014 10:23:00 AM

Thnx Linda !

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/1/2014 5:41:00 PM

Congratulation on your well deserved win Dr Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/4/2014 10:22:00 AM

Thnx Frederic ! An honour to hear from u!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/1/2014 4:00:00 PM

this sparkling write just grabbed me, dr. upma... thanks for gracing my contest and sweet congrats on your fine win.. huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/4/2014 10:21:00 AM

Thnx Nette ! It's an honour to shine in ur contest,, ur contests r unique !

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/1/2014 1:26:00 PM

Hi Dr. Upma- Bravo on your fine win - well deserved, my friend! This is such a lovely write!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Pandita for ur lovely wishes!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2014 11:49:00 AM

I love the imagery that shines in this poem, Upma. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 1:37:00 PM

Thanks Paul for ur visits n ur lovely wishes// Upma//

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 10:33:00 AM

Beautiful imagery creating an absorbing picture, Dr. Upma, congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/1/2014 1:35:00 PM

Thnx Dr Ram for ur lovely words n wishes!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2014 2:14:00 PM

thanks, dr. upma.. we need 25 syllables per stanza.. can we work on this?.. nice!.. huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/18/2014 7:45:00 AM

Thanks Nette ! I had construed it wrong ,, I thot upto 25 syl n not exactly 25 ,,, appreciate valuable feedback ! I hv worked on this,, trust it's upto the mark now !

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2014 5:11:00 PM

What a beautiful, upbeat poem, Dr. Upma! I am not familiar with this form, but I love the images you create with the twinkling stars kissing earth and the "Dance to serenity!" Just yesterday I was chatting with a Souper about people whose native languages are not English, but they still provide extraordinary work. You were the first one I thought of, dear. Love, Carolyn

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/16/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thnx Carolyn ! Haven't ever felt that English was a foreign language ,, coz right from grade one , all curricula in eng ,, I hv written much in my native language as well ,, that's Hindi ,,, and few of shayari in Urdu too,, // Upma // love to hv ur comments always !!

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/16/2014 3:32:00 PM

beautiful and yes.. so sweet!!! ...well done, Dr. Upma!! :O))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/16/2014 8:13:00 PM

Thnx Aiyah !

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/16/2014 3:07:00 PM

aww sweet :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/16/2014 8:13:00 PM

Thnx dear !