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Stars

Stars light up the sky, as the stars twinkle and shine. The pain invades her, look up and say a prayer, feeling the stars in her heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2011 7:30:00 AM
tantalized, cory... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:38:00 AM
Wonderful expressions of pain in the heart, with amazing images, cory
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:17:00 AM
Oh impressive piece cory.. feeling the emotion and relating it to stars luv.. a grand write .. luv stars myself.. they are pretty but oh those sharp points .. expressive ...
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:46:00 AM
Short n sweet Cory xx
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