Stars

Stars light up the sky,
as the stars twinkle and shine.
The pain invades her,
look up and say a prayer,
feeling the stars in her heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 7:30 AM
tantalized, cory... :) huggs, nette
Mehta Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Wonderful expressions of pain in the heart, with amazing images, cory
Sweetheart Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Oh impressive piece cory.. feeling the emotion and relating it to stars luv.. a grand write .. luv stars myself.. they are pretty but oh those sharp points .. expressive ...
Edwards Avatar
May 11, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Short n sweet Cory xx
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