Stars

You are the star you wish to reach
Stars do not fly higher than yourself
Nor are they above you.......
You already are a star and the dream
you wish to reach.........
You are a dreamer, a star.....
You are for keeps!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Samuel Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 3:45 PM
I like this poem quite a lot. I can find myself relating to wanting to reach for my dreams... I just haven't realized that I am the star and the dream and that everything that I need has already came true. Very nice read.
Green Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 2:59 PM
I lIke Your Poem I found it very insparational which made it more intresting :) Luv kareena
Rich Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Enjoyed this interesting piece of poetry you have written here. Also, will have to read more of your work as well. Have a great day
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:09 PM
So short but so cute!! Me likes! andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 2:21 PM
I personally LUV stars Susan and this poem is so unique in its read.. my Mom always bought me something with a star on it.. jewelry, note paper, clothes, paintings, .. so awesome to recall this from your words .. enjoyed my friend.. ciao from Italy ..luv..
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Glad that you wrote such an encouraging write..Enjoyed..Sara
Brown Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:25 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Susan. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
Cobb Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:46 AM
reminds me of one of my favorite songs by earth, wind, and fire...shining star. you are a shining star today. thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Hill Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:19 AM
I like...TAH
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