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Starry Little Champs

They illuminate the muse giving it that zeal Their gleams have a magical feel Enchanting us with glowing appeal They are loved by all across the board Lighting up the imagination, wonderfully adored Spreading their glows in joyous accord Awesome little insects generating micro amps Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs Lighting up the night with their little lamps

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Date: 2/1/2024 7:16:00 PM
' Lighting up the night with their little lamps. ' Such a cute way to describe fireflies. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. I'm looking forward watching them again. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/1/2024 9:44:00 AM
I love the flickering fireflies. Great rhymes and imagery.
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Date: 2/1/2024 6:50:00 AM
Awwn love those starry little champs, such an adorable write, dear Joseph. I am in awe of your beautiful rhymes and descriptions of magical fireflies that bring gorgeous light, midst darkness.. So mystical.. Love your wordsmithery here too, it's really serene.. Sending best wishes!
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Date: 1/31/2024 12:32:00 PM
Wonderful and delightful imagery dear Joseph... so lovely..
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Date: 1/31/2024 10:07:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your fun write. As a young kid, I remember catching Fireflies. Then putting them in a mayo jar/watching their flickering lights. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.............
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Date: 1/31/2024 6:18:00 AM
Your descriptions bring to fore the magical phenomenon you see: Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs Lighting up the night with their little lamps--such is the beauty nature bestows through your pen, Joseph!
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Date: 1/31/2024 1:29:00 AM
Dear joseph, i really admire your rhymes and your wordplay as always is so brilliant, i love the cadence of this and how it flows, and especially the lines “ Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs Lighting up the night with their little lamps“ magical! So gorgeous! And the imagery there is so captivating! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light
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Date: 1/30/2024 10:02:00 PM
I love lightning bugs. I enjoyed this poem about them. Thanks for the poem about the beautiful bugs.
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Date: 1/30/2024 5:21:00 PM
awww, just as clever as can be. Great rhyme scheme...flowed so smoothly. I didn't know they illuminated the muse...I need to find some fireflies :-)
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