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Starry Little Champs

 They illuminate the muse giving it that zeal
 Their gleams have a magical feel
 Enchanting us with glowing appeal

 They are loved by all across the board
 Lighting up the imagination, wonderfully adored
 Spreading their glows in joyous accord

 Awesome little insects generating micro amps
 Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs
 Lighting up the night with their little lamps

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/1/2024 7:16:00 PM

' Lighting up the night with their little lamps. ' Such a cute way to describe fireflies. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. I'm looking forward watching them again. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/1/2024 9:44:00 AM

I love the flickering fireflies. Great rhymes and imagery.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/1/2024 6:50:00 AM

Awwn love those starry little champs, such an adorable write, dear Joseph. I am in awe of your beautiful rhymes and descriptions of magical fireflies that bring gorgeous light, midst darkness.. So mystical.. Love your wordsmithery here too, it's really serene.. Sending best wishes!

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 12:32:00 PM

Wonderful and delightful imagery dear Joseph... so lovely..

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/31/2024 10:07:00 AM

I really enjoyed reading your fun write. As a young kid, I remember catching Fireflies. Then putting them in a mayo jar/watching their flickering lights. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/31/2024 6:18:00 AM

Your descriptions bring to fore the magical phenomenon you see: Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs Lighting up the night with their little lamps--such is the beauty nature bestows through your pen, Joseph!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2024 1:29:00 AM

Dear joseph, i really admire your rhymes and your wordplay as always is so brilliant, i love the cadence of this and how it flows, and especially the lines “ Fireflies flickering, like starry little champs Lighting up the night with their little lamps“ magical! So gorgeous! And the imagery there is so captivating! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light