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intriguing lines Kash.. cross zero? sounds unique luv.. very imaginative work.. my friend..luv..

HI, kash! I have a tutoring job in half an hour or so and am just killing time at the school before I go over there! Have a lovely day!

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Nice rearrangement of the typical haiku...I have never heard of cross zero, Kashi...but I do get a sense it is similar to my childhood game of Tick Tac Toe...Thanks for visiting my poems and your friendship...Hope all is well at your camp...Can u believe it is back up to 100 degrees F today? Give us a break, sun! Gwendolena (nice new nickname for me,,,,fun!)

lovely interesting haiku, Kash

come on, kashi... i want more!..:) hugggs to you on a rainy day!

love the way your poetry always makes the reader think..! great imagery!

Kash....cool movement! jimbo

HI, Kash, I won't be here much this weekend. Hopefully I'll find time tomorrow but not after that! See ya later, Alligator.

Awesome write Kash.. I always enjoy your haiku.. Thank you for the heads up on the spelling error.. ;-)

okay, send me the money for a new computer!... enjoyed this 'ku more on further readings, kashi bud!..:) huggs!

I can't help but smile with the simplicity and delight this poem brings!

Kash, very visual, I can see you doing it...David

It was such a pleasure to read your poetry today Kash. I hope to be able in the next few weeks to find the time and energy to read and comment. May you walk through the inspirational garden that you may continue to write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

darn swell, kashi bud!.... missed you; my computer conked out.. hoa re you!.. give me more and come visit!.:) huggs!

You make me laugh. You make me cry. Or maybe I make my own self do that stuff. Ya know what I mean? (the question mark is superfluous) Thanks, Namaste, ~N

I like the looks of this. I wonder if cross-zero is another word for our Tic Tac Toe!!

This is a fabulous write my friend! I'm always intrigued with these Haikus! Great Work!!