Starlings At Dusk

dusk, and starlings flock;
  murmuring shapes across sky
  then downwards  to roost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM
I love that middle line: murmuring shapes across sky
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Most birds are gone by dusk around here. Nice write again.
Dey Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Description is clear through your small haiku...great job
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