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Starling

A meteor crashed into heather, They reacted together, Not much later that night, A young starling took flight.

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Date: 3/21/2025 11:29:00 PM
i never could get the hang of the short poem i enjoyed yours
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John Critten
Date: 3/22/2025 2:09:00 AM
Thank you, I call this type of poem MetamorphODESes, where 1 or 2 things turn into something else.

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