Starling

A meteor crashed into heather,
They reacted together,
Not much later that night,
A young starling took flight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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HAYNES Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 11:29 PM
i never could get the hang of the short poem i enjoyed yours
Critten Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 2:09 AM
Thank you, I call this type of poem MetamorphODESes, where 1 or 2 things turn into something else.
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