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Starlight of my Life
When you found me I was Lost, teary and alone Alike a fledgling bird Fallen out from its home. From the first moment on I felt I’d found a friend You, my true love only Helped a damaged heart mend. You showed love is the way To finding happiness To rejoice and to sing For all life’s blessedness. You set my heart aflame Poetry in motion With a love that’s deeper Than the deepest ocean. There’s no star out in space That sparkles as you do You are a leading light I’ll always follow you. You’re starlight of my life Charming prince of my dreams I’ll love you forever Till moon beams cease to stream.
9th September 2021 The One Who Touched My Heart Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina MacIntosh **********

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Date: 9/18/2021 7:10:00 AM
WoW! Belle, Not only is your poem filled with a deep love for your husband, it was also well-written and heartfelt. You are blessed to have found such a love; some are still waiting. I see that you won; congratulations, it was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/18/2021 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for your generosity Alexis, I was pleased to have been placed in the contest as this poem is one of my personal favourites… Belle
Date: 9/18/2021 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations Belle... Such a loving, poetess you are.,, Panagiota
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/18/2021 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Panagiota, much appreciated… Belle
Date: 9/15/2021 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Belle. A beautiful poem for your dear husband. Have a nice day. Hugs
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Date: 9/14/2021 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Starlight of my Life" is a Beautiful write/tribute to your husband. Every girl needs her prince. Have a great/blessed day..............
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:50:00 AM
This is lovely. I really like the lyrical feel it has when reading. Congratulations on placing in the contest :-)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/14/2021 7:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Natasha, delighted you like it… Belle
Date: 9/14/2021 5:09:00 AM
A beautiful love song in the form of a quatrain. Congratulations!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/14/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Christuraj… Belle
Date: 9/14/2021 4:45:00 AM
I love this so! Amazing write. Congrats and Thank you so much for entering. God bless you with love, Gina
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/14/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you for the placement Gina, I’m thrilled. God bless you with love too… Belle
Date: 9/9/2021 12:17:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your husband Belle, Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 9/9/2021 1:07:00 AM
Thank you for that Tom… Belle

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