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Starkle Starkle Little Twink

Starkle, Starkle Little Twink Starkle, starkle little twink what the hell you are, I think tantalizing hanging moon rocking chair or empty spoon. Twinkle, twinkle, ain’t you cute glitter on night’s darkest suit, jewels upon an evening’s gown tiara mate to kingly crown. Needle point of heaven’s face pinholes poked in deepest space eyes that watch us from afar twinkle, twinkle, little star. submitted to – Twinkle Twinkle Little Star – contest sponsor – Kelly Deschler

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Date: 7/16/2023 2:34:00 AM
How do you do this? Brilliant!
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:22:00 PM
John, congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
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Date: 5/11/2015 1:54:00 PM
I loved this the first time I read it..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:25:00 AM
Love your take on the theme, John. Congrats on your fine top win! Sandra
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Date: 5/9/2015 7:52:00 PM
Sweet one John, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:32:00 AM
And this will complete a troika of thanks...
Date: 5/9/2015 6:39:00 PM
John, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:31:00 AM
And again I thank you...SKAT
Date: 5/9/2015 3:26:00 PM
great twist on the theme - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I thought this would be right up you poetic alley. Appreciate you support.
Date: 5/9/2015 2:05:00 PM
Love the tongue in cheek, twist you gave this theme !! It brought me a smile !!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:30:00 AM
Glad to hear you enjoyed it Carrie. Thanks for your continued support.
Date: 5/9/2015 12:27:00 PM
I loved this very creative and wonderful poem, John. Congrats on a first place win!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks Kelly, there is still a bit of the "little kid" taunting the muse.
Date: 5/9/2015 12:27:00 PM
Well done, John! Congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:29:00 AM
thanks Mark
Date: 4/22/2015 7:09:00 PM
This is so cute..All stanzas are great but the last one is just wonderful. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 5/10/2015 8:27:00 AM
Thanks Barbara, I had a bit of fun with the stars.

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