Staring At the Water

While staring at the water I saw someone swimming underwater

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Alfred Berggren

Date: 7/14/2017 2:17:00 PM

Anyone you know?

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/15/2017 2:48:00 PM

No one I know.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/5/2017 12:48:00 PM

Hello Darlene. I also found this to be an impact statement as well. You leave us with a mini story. It was the title that caught my eye. Well done. Enjoy the night.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/5/2017 1:16:00 PM

I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.Good afternoon.It is raining here today.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/28/2017 4:43:00 PM

This is cute Darlene. ; )

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/29/2017 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Connie. It was fun to write.

Edward Mccall

Date: 4/27/2017 11:08:00 PM

LOL; I love the way your mind works. two nighttime chuckles in a row don't ever lose your sense of humor Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2017 8:19:00 AM

I promise not to lose my sense of humor. So pleased you got a chuckle out of it.