Staring At the Water

While staring at the water
I saw someone swimming underwater
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Berggren Avatar
July 14, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Anyone you know?
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 15, 2017 at 2:48 PM
No one I know.
Ricci Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Hello Darlene. I also found this to be an impact statement as well. You leave us with a mini story. It was the title that caught my eye. Well done. Enjoy the night.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 1:16 PM
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem.Good afternoon.It is raining here today.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 4:43 PM
This is cute Darlene. ; )
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 29, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Thank you Connie. It was fun to write.
Mccall Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:08 PM
LOL; I love the way your mind works. two nighttime chuckles in a row don't ever lose your sense of humor Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:19 AM
I promise not to lose my sense of humor. So pleased you got a chuckle out of it.
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