Staring At the Walls

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THANK YOU, DARREN WHITE FOR THE TWEAKS

F
At these walls, I am staring
Am
They don't seem to be sharing
C
The way I feel
G
About you

F
In the night when I'm alone
Am
I reach for the silent phone
C
Just to tell you
G
How I feel

Chorus:

D                                 E
You don't know where I roam
                   G
Where I call home
               D
You don't know

D                                    E
You don't know where I belong
                        G
What makes me strong
               D
You don't know

F
As I walk this path today
Am
I just sometimes need to say
C
I'm thinkin' always
G
Of you

F
Wonderful world this would be
Am
If we all could learn to see
C
Through the eyes
G
Of dreamers

Chorus: 

D                                 E
You don't know where I roam
                   G
Where I call home
               D
You don't know

D                                    E
You don't know where I belong
                        G
What makes me strong
               D
You don't know

~~~~~~~~~

Solo lead break for 16 Bars~

F
At four grey walls, I stare
Am
When it gets too much to bear
C
Nothing matters
G
Without you

F
In the night I'm cryin' out
Am
More of a whisper than a shout
C
Wanting you with me
G
While I dream

Chorus:

D                                 E
You don't know where I roam
                   G
Where I call home
               D
You don't know

D                                    E
You don't know where I belong
                        G
What makes me strong
               D
You don't know

F
It's not that I'm complaining
Am
Still, these memories remain
C
Of the past times
G
Spent with you

F
In the night when I'm alone
Am
I keep reachin' for the phone
C
Just to tell you
G
How I feel

Chorus: 

D                                 E
You don't know where I roam
                   G
Where I call home
               D
You don't know

D                                    E
You don't know where I belong
                        G
What makes me strong
               D
You don't know

F
In the night when I'm alone
Am
I keep reachin' for the phone
C
Just to tell you
G sustain
How I feel.

Coda:

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/19/2017 7:05:00 AM
Oh boy, how could I have missed this post :) But hey! Budgie! where's the music gone all of a sudden :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 7:13:00 AM
Haha, you know how the rhythm goes! It'll be a couple of months before we record it! /|\
Date: 6/17/2017 9:30:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Date: 6/18/2017 8:10:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Funom /|\
Date: 6/14/2017 8:47:00 PM
I like this poem. I must say good night.
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White Wolf
Date: 6/15/2017 2:10:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene /|\
Date: 6/14/2017 6:35:00 AM
Nice lyric, WW:)
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White Wolf
Date: 6/14/2017 6:42:00 AM
The lyrics are subject to change shortly! I'm happy with the music that accompanies them, but that's it! Thanks, Jo /|\
Date: 6/13/2017 4:58:00 PM
What's a Budgie? I am amazed Wolf! I have tried writing lyrics but just can't get the hang of it. What's the trick? Anyway, really enjoyed this. - Dean
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Date: 6/13/2017 5:19:00 PM
Haha, it's short for budgerigar, it's my nickname! If you can write poetry then you can do lyrics! This one I did the lyrics first then put the music to them, but usually, I do the music first! Thanks, Dean /|\
Date: 6/13/2017 8:17:00 AM
Terrific Budgie....I can visualize you singing this
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White Wolf
Date: 6/13/2017 8:33:00 AM
Only to write them, I have a friend who will be doing the singing! Thanks, Tim /|\
Date: 6/13/2017 4:32:00 AM
A delightful song , I really enjoyed it...Maria
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Date: 6/13/2017 4:36:00 AM
It's the first draft, needs more attention! But thank you /|\
Date: 6/12/2017 8:59:00 PM
Wonderful song, WW, took me a while to figure out what you were doing with the Letters. At first I thought it was an acrostic verse..
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Date: 6/13/2017 12:31:00 AM
Haha, but then you got to the chorus and thought, Ahh! Thanks, Eve /|\
Date: 6/12/2017 8:32:00 PM
This is a wonderful song Budgie - I would love to hear it too! :D <3
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Date: 6/13/2017 12:29:00 AM
My friend is currently selling his house that we usually record in! So it maybe a couple of months before we hit it again! Thanks, Sara /|\
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