Stargazing: the Hopefulness of the Human Heart

Understanding WE may never physically be ....it continues to be a concept that I often contemplate...a mental picture in my head that I constantly visualize...I keep my DISTANCE...wondering if I'm even worth your time...admiring you from afar as if you were some shining star...*INTRIGUED*....feelings that I've fought in the past...they manifest until finally reaching the surface...*HOPELESS*...I'm unable to subdue what my truly heart desires...what's next?...I don't have an answer...but I feel this moment of clarity is necessary...for sanity's sake... 

To Be Continued


CiD *Chivalry Is Dead*
"A Hopeful Cynic"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/17/2013 10:28:00 PM
Hi Clairborne nice writing...keep dreaming... and you'll see the magical occurrence! Welcome to poetrysoup hope u'l enjoy to read different poems here. You can visit my page and I'm happy to see you there!
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Claiborne Randle
Date: 5/20/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Rick...I will definitely read some of your pieces Elai...it's always inspiring to see other people sharing themselves freely...also you would be glad to know that the whole magical occurence thing actually ended up working out for me hahahaha
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