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Stargazing

Day gives way to night The darkening skies Come alive Magic flecks across the dark Twinkling to their tune Music unsung A canvas built on dreams Vibrating with wishes Secrets told Glimpsing into the unknown Neither here nor there Just being

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2012 6:23:00 PM

Hi...Shannon... how are you?? STAR gazing..lol... By the rate you are going when it comes to the soup...i say you won't get this till another month... lol..major joke... ha ha..thank you for finally answering my question... weeeee;-) You should write something... if you don't I will come back and bother you... you know..this is a very beautiful poem... read it already... but,, oh well... stopping by to say hi really..always..pd

Darryl Davis

Date: 1/12/2012 8:35:00 AM

I rather enjoyed this one :-)

Joe Flach

Date: 1/11/2012 5:05:00 PM

Interestingly enough, for me, it is during my hours of stargazing, especially when doing so from my hottub out back, that I get most of my inspiration for future poems. This is very nicely worded and arranged. And, is more than "just being".

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/5/2012 1:30:00 PM

thankxxx Shannon for these words so mesmerizing.. and for the luv and inspirational comments on blogs... appreciate warm friendship found with u here luv..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/24/2011 10:27:00 PM

Dear Shannon, Amazing POETRY, so visual the night Landscape of the sky, I bow to YOUR Perfection. Wishing YOU and YOURS a very Merry Christmas and a Happy, Healthy, and Prosperous New Year LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2011 9:09:00 PM

Hello Shannon,,, where are you sweetie. just wondering.. Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/9/2011 9:56:00 PM

* "HELLO, MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL SHANNON * I SENT YOUR LOVELY BEAUTY A SOUP REPLY *.* BEAUTIFUL * THIS WONDERFUL STAR GAZERS POE * I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT * I FEEL LIKE A FLUTTERING BUTTERFLY * THANK YOU FOR YOUR SWEET VISIT * ALWAYS A JOY * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/8/2011 7:33:00 AM

Beautifully written.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/25/2011 3:34:00 PM

* "Thank You Dear Shannon * I Appreciate Your Kind Visit & Comment * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/24/2011 9:10:00 AM

* "I Love Everything About This Beauty * My Dear Sweet & Owww Sooo Beautiful Shannon * 'A Canvas Built On Dreams * Vibrating With Wishes * Secrets Told * Just Being' * Stirs My Spirit Extremely Deeply Inside & All I Can See Is Your Precious Beauty * Sooo Lovely * My Beautiful Luv * Always & Forever Beyound * 'Your Sarah.'" *

Clay Robbins

Date: 11/24/2011 8:46:00 AM

Sweet Stargazing Introspective... ...I guess this is for the sighted such a universal delight; stargazing invokes a sundry of thoughts in our species.