Stargazing


   



      my head in your lap
      staring at your sculptured chin
      moon highlights no sin




         September 20, 2020
             10am PST

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Nicole Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 5:33 PM
This is so beautiful and romantic. There is something magical about the stars, the night. Lingering in the calm, with the one you love. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
Romios Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Hi Brandy..I so agree...Stars are so beautiful and especially when with the one you love, Celestial intoxication, perhaps? Glad you enjoyed Pangie xx
Theraven Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Panagiota, Nicely rested Senryu. -Richard
Romios Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Richard! Nice seeing you again. Thank you for a Sweet Comment! Pangie xx
James Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 2:13 AM
dreamy and romantic, love it, Emilia : )
Romios Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Hi Emilia.. Yes! It is both. Wonderful times to recall Pangie xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 9:57 PM
I can just picture that romantic moment captured well in your senyru. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:07 AM
Its pretty simple! I like simplicity and plain English. My poetry is how I speak in the real world. I dont go off the deep end trying to startle people. That's for other poets here. Pamgie xx
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