Stargazing

my head in your lap staring at your sculptured chin moon highlights no sin September 20, 2020 10am PST

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/22/2020 5:33:00 PM

This is so beautiful and romantic. There is something magical about the stars, the night. Lingering in the calm, with the one you love. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/22/2020 5:41:00 PM

Hi Brandy..I so agree...Stars are so beautiful and especially when with the one you love, Celestial intoxication, perhaps? Glad you enjoyed Pangie xx

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/22/2020 8:34:00 AM

Panagiota, Nicely rested Senryu. -Richard

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/22/2020 11:11:00 AM

Richard! Nice seeing you again. Thank you for a Sweet Comment! Pangie xx

Emilia James

Date: 9/22/2020 2:13:00 AM

dreamy and romantic, love it, Emilia : )

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/22/2020 11:09:00 AM

Hi Emilia.. Yes! It is both. Wonderful times to recall Pangie xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/21/2020 9:57:00 PM

I can just picture that romantic moment captured well in your senyru. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/22/2020 11:07:00 AM

Its pretty simple! I like simplicity and plain English. My poetry is how I speak in the real world. I dont go off the deep end trying to startle people. That's for other poets here. Pamgie xx