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Stardust Wink

In louver, I waited ‘til night confined the sky Incandescent stardust once made me starry-eyed That tempestuous evening hid the Milky Way Nocturnal beetle mimicked pristine light that I prayed In a flick, my desire to see you restrained by distance I just clutched to stargazing to show me moments of you An interlude to make feelings in alliance Where kisses and hugs are free to view Lurking in the sky, time held its breath As my eyes glowed luxurious in our love affairs My heart sang louder to clamor the light in stealth In flower’s scent enchanted time as I stared For I knew evening panorama would soon disappear Last moment I spoke lover’s prayer so powerful As stars tried filching a moment to appear so near Came pouring stardust in my longing to reunite with your soul By: Noel N. Villarosa

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/30/2013 3:30:00 PM
which contest did this win in? A belated congrats to you.
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:29:00 PM
beautiful incorporation of nature within a love poem. Noel.
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:07:00 AM
This is so romantically beautiful Noel..bravo
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:13:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:42:00 PM
This winning work has great poetic qualities..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 1/23/2013 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Noel! This is very lovely. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2013 11:46:00 AM
What a beautiful way to reunite..under a star filled sky... Beautiful poem !! Congrats on your winning spot.
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:36:00 AM
Congratulations Noel xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:15:00 PM
Noel, . Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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