Stardust Wink

In louver, I waited ‘til night confined the sky
Incandescent stardust once made me starry-eyed
That tempestuous evening hid the Milky Way
Nocturnal beetle mimicked pristine light that I prayed

In a flick, my desire to see you restrained by distance
I just clutched to stargazing to show me moments of you
An interlude to make feelings in alliance
Where kisses and hugs are free to view

Lurking in the sky, time held its breath
As my eyes glowed luxurious in our love affairs
My heart sang louder to clamor the light in stealth
In flower’s scent enchanted time as I stared

For I knew evening panorama would soon disappear
Last moment I spoke lover’s prayer so powerful
As stars tried filching a moment to appear so near
Came pouring stardust in my longing to reunite with your soul

By: Noel N. Villarosa

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/30/2013 3:30:00 PM
which contest did this win in? A belated congrats to you.
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:29:00 PM
beautiful incorporation of nature within a love poem. Noel.
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:07:00 AM
This is so romantically beautiful Noel..bravo
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:13:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/24/2013 1:42:00 PM
This winning work has great poetic qualities..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 1/23/2013 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Noel! This is very lovely. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/23/2013 11:46:00 AM
What a beautiful way to reunite..under a star filled sky... Beautiful poem !! Congrats on your winning spot.
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Date: 1/23/2013 2:36:00 AM
Congratulations Noel xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:15:00 PM
Noel, . Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
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