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Onclaud Written 1/1/2025

 

STARDUST TAMES ME

Beneath dusk twilight briskness of the night
Natures briefest of deep hesitations.
Off a bumpy quiet foot path, deeper
Into root of virgin forest towards
Narrows a patch beneath thick mixed coppice.
Moon views with romantic nightingale's croon,
Pleasure upon obsidian hue lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 4, 2026 at 11:55 AM
exquisite imagery! I especially liked the last line 'obsidian hue lake!' wow
Cunningham Avatar
January 2, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Love the imagery in your verse Eve. Hope you're keeping well. Happy New Year to you. Tom
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