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Stardust of Imaginings

I drift through the eternities on the translucent wings of imagination that form in the mind's body of silence where I abandon the world and fall into the flowing stream that moves through my soul of wonder contest Stardust sponsor nette onclaud 6/14/20

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Celine Rose Mariotti

Date: 6/27/2020 4:24:00 PM

Dear Frederic, I like this poem. I think we all wonder what the afterlife is like. There's no one who can really tell us. Good poem!!! Congratulations on your win!!! Also, I read the comment you wrote on my poem about the Korean War. My Dad, God rest his soul, always said it was a "Forgotten War" and no one cared what those fellows like him went through. Take care Celine Rose Mariotti

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/22/2020 1:57:00 AM

This is a brilliant write Frederic. Congratulations on your win :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/20/2020 7:27:00 AM

Congrats on your wind...I love the idea of abandon the world!

James Inman

Date: 6/19/2020 11:28:00 PM

A wonderfully ethereal write Frederic.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2020 9:53:00 PM

I often wonder if collective intelligence helps to inspire poetry Frederic. This is a wonderful poem deserving of your First placement. Congratulations! xxoo

John Watt

Date: 6/19/2020 4:33:00 PM

Frederic, I loved this poetic capture of the creative process. Congrats on your high placement in the Stardust contest ~ John

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 6/18/2020 4:07:00 AM

The Eternity Catacombs of the Mind's Body of Silence: softly, softly, silently, the oarsman standing traverses the smooth rapids of Nyx, cool yet so very warm, ferrying his precious cargo towards the shores of Evermore. x

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2020 10:06:00 PM

This poem exudes wonder, extending the imagination in a delightful way.