Stardust of Imaginings

I drift through the eternities
on the translucent wings of imagination
that form in the mind's body of silence
where I abandon the world
and fall into the flowing stream
that moves through my soul of wonder

contest Stardust
sponsor nette onclaud
6/14/20
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Mariotti Avatar
June 27, 2020 at 4:24 PM
Dear Frederic, I like this poem. I think we all wonder what the afterlife is like. There's no one who can really tell us. Good poem!!! Congratulations on your win!!! Also, I read the comment you wrote on my poem about the Korean War. My Dad, God rest his soul, always said it was a "Forgotten War" and no one cared what those fellows like him went through. Take care Celine Rose Mariotti
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 1:57 AM
This is a brilliant write Frederic. Congratulations on your win :)
Mcgee Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Congrats on your wind...I love the idea of abandon the world!
Inman Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 11:28 PM
A wonderfully ethereal write Frederic.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 9:53 PM
I often wonder if collective intelligence helps to inspire poetry Frederic. This is a wonderful poem deserving of your First placement. Congratulations! xxoo
Watt Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 4:33 PM
Frederic, I loved this poetic capture of the creative process. Congrats on your high placement in the Stardust contest ~ John
Labyrinth Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 4:07 AM
The Eternity Catacombs of the Mind's Body of Silence: softly, softly, silently, the oarsman standing traverses the smooth rapids of Nyx, cool yet so very warm, ferrying his precious cargo towards the shores of Evermore. x
Krutsinger Avatar
June 14, 2020 at 10:06 PM
This poem exudes wonder, extending the imagination in a delightful way.
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