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Stardust In Sandcastles


     Hypnotized by the symphony of your entrancing slumber,
          I dip my shriveled fingers into your haloed silhouette;
      Oh they bloom in luminescent boundless ocean of our love,
             then wave undulating stars to form moist sandcastles
        that float with humming wind to sleepless souls afar--
   drizzling as snowflakes to replenish each parched oasis



June 15, 2020

STARDUST Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
~Winner: 4th Place

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V. Deepa

Date: 6/20/2020 7:31:00 AM

Hello Aditi mam, Congratulations on your win. So beautifully written.. Loved the way of forming moist Sandcastles. Keep writing.Take care.With love~Deepa

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:26:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and encouragement Deepa. Blessings and love :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/19/2020 10:24:00 PM

Congratulations Aditi on your wonderful win! I really enjoyed this beautiful piece. xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:25:00 PM

Thank you for coming back to congratulate me Connie. Blessings and much love :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/19/2020 4:34:00 PM

Just what Connie said! Your poetry always has wings. It just takes flight taking the reader along! Hearties congratulations on your win!

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/20/2020 12:25:00 PM

I am always honoured by your kind appreciation Edward :) Thank you for your warm wishes. God bless you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/16/2020 9:51:00 AM

Your poetry never disappoints Aditi. I wish I could write as well. This is lovely! xxoo

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/17/2020 3:48:00 AM

That's really kind of you to say so Connie. You are such an outstanding poet that I wish I could write like you do :) Thank you for your generous appreciation. Much love and blessings :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/16/2020 1:15:00 AM

Wow.. Oh they bloom in luminescent boundless ocean of our love.. lovely write Aditi.. You took the contest to another level.. Good luck..

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:49:00 AM

Glad you love my words Jenish. Thank you for your gracious appreciation. God bless you :)

John Watt

Date: 6/15/2020 2:42:00 PM

One thing I admire most about your talent is the ability to write deeply about so many subjects. I value that, and always enjoy reading your words, Aditi.

Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/16/2020 6:49:00 AM

I am glad you love my words and efforts dear friend. It is always a pleasure to be encouraged by you. God bless you :)