Aditi Mishra Poet Free verse

Stardust In Sandcastles

     Hypnotized by the symphony of your entrancing slumber,
          I dip my shriveled fingers into your haloed silhouette;
      Oh they bloom in luminescent boundless ocean of our love,
             then wave undulating stars to form moist sandcastles
        that float with humming wind to sleepless souls afar--
   drizzling as snowflakes to replenish each parched oasis



June 15, 2020

STARDUST Poetry Contest
Sponsor: nette onclaud
~Winner: 4th Place

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V. Deepa June 20, 2020 at 7:31 AM Hello Aditi mam, Congratulations on your win. So beautifully written.. Loved the way of forming moist Sandcastles. Keep writing.Take care.With love~Deepa Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 12:26 PM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation and encouragement Deepa. Blessings and love :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 19, 2020 at 10:24 PM Congratulations Aditi on your wonderful win! I really enjoyed this beautiful piece. xxoo Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 12:25 PM Thank you for coming back to congratulate me Connie. Blessings and much love :)

Edward Ibeh June 19, 2020 at 4:34 PM Just what Connie said! Your poetry always has wings. It just takes flight taking the reader along! Hearties congratulations on your win! Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 12:25 PM I am always honoured by your kind appreciation Edward :) Thank you for your warm wishes. God bless you

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2020 at 9:51 AM Your poetry never disappoints Aditi. I wish I could write as well. This is lovely! xxoo Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 3:48 AM That's really kind of you to say so Connie. You are such an outstanding poet that I wish I could write like you do :) Thank you for your generous appreciation. Much love and blessings :)

Jenish Somadas June 16, 2020 at 1:15 AM Wow.. Oh they bloom in luminescent boundless ocean of our love.. lovely write Aditi.. You took the contest to another level.. Good luck.. Aditi Mishra June 16, 2020 at 6:49 AM Glad you love my words Jenish. Thank you for your gracious appreciation. God bless you :)

John Watt June 15, 2020 at 2:42 PM One thing I admire most about your talent is the ability to write deeply about so many subjects. I value that, and always enjoy reading your words, Aditi. Aditi Mishra June 16, 2020 at 6:49 AM I am glad you love my words and efforts dear friend. It is always a pleasure to be encouraged by you. God bless you :)

Tom Cunningham June 15, 2020 at 7:11 AM Very romantic lines Aditi, good luck in the contest Tom Aditi Mishra June 15, 2020 at 9:10 AM Glad you loved my words Tom. Thank you for your kind wishes. God bless you :)