Stardust Galactic Imprints

Float with me, my love, amid coral pink nebulae on the astral stagecraft
Surfing wavelengths ultraviolet, in close encounter of two dreamy hearts;
Oh, how charming it is, to woo romance in opal aura of stardust galaxies!
Glistening your happy smile, in sculptor’s blueprints upon blushed motifs
Like the ephemeral musings of burning meteoroids on ruby rose tapestry
Lost in the constellation’s scarlet orange tinges on kaleidoscopic imprints.

June 15, 2020
Placed 3rd:Stardust Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
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Crabtree Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 9:10 AM
You have combined love and the solar system in this well-pinned verse, Vijay. I really like it :)
Ball Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 6:04 PM
WoW! Beautiful words painting a very romantic picture. No wonder you won. great stuff! God Bless, JB
Mishra Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win Vijay. God bless you :)
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Thank for the return visit, Aditi--much appreciate your valued comments.
Proxenos Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 9:08 AM
WOW Vijay, what a breathtaking entry for the contest and such a brilliant win - how lovely to imagine that our loved ones that have passed, are a soul somewhere out there in the galaxy among the brilliant stars. Excellent poem excellent win! Hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Much appreciate my friend, your kind remarks--many thanks.
May Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:46 AM
Thank you for the return visit, Joseph--much appreciate.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 10:18 PM
Wow Vijay...this is impressive! Love may raise our souls to travel amidst the stars. I love it! Congratulations on your win. I feel honored to be in your company! xxoo
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Much appreciate Connie your valued remarks--many thanks my friend.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 5:55 PM
Amazing words that touch hearts. Much love and many blessings sent your way, friend ... Gina
Pandit Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 9:45 AM
Thank you Regina--much appreciate.
Nicole Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Soft, sweet and loving. These words from your heart. This is beautiful in every way. Keep floating my dear friend. You belong in the clouds. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 6:14 AM
Much appreciate the kind feedback Brandy--many thanks my friend.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Wow, Vijay! That is some awesome, cosmic imagery! Love it...blessings, Rhonda xx
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2020 at 6:13 AM
Thank you Rhonda--much appreciate.
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 5:44 PM
Very colorfully descriptive, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Much appreciate, Andrea--many thanks.
Mishra Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:20 AM
Gosh so enchanting! This feels like a ride on waves of another galaxy. Best wishes for the contest :)
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Aditi--much appreciate.
Michael Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 4:14 AM
Imagery and color...and a free flowing lover too...all in space...Nice one
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Much appreciate, Arturo--many thanks.
Vangaveti Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Galaxies are dancing around me now!! I'm lost among those stars!!!
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Swetha--much appreciate.
May Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 9:27 AM
Close encounters of romance in stardust galaxies, Beautifully penned Vijay
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Canerdy Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Amazing descriptions and so romantic, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Trifiatis Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 4:35 AM
Galactic poetry that makes stars envious of your Muse dearest, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Cunningham Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 2:30 AM
Well written Vijay, with a sprinkle of romance. Good luck in the contest Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Many thanks Tom--much appreciate.
Somadas Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 12:51 AM
Wonderful imagery Vijay.. Good luck in the contest..
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.
Horsman Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 10:21 PM
Wow, i am reading some wonderful, Stardust poetry, today...and this is up there with the best..
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
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