Kash Poet Poet Verse

Stardust Drench Me

Stardust  drench  me  with  dreams  tonight
fill  this  heart  with  heavenly  lights
when  the  world  is  deep  asleep
lonely  hearts  which  love  to  weep
sprinkle  your  dreams  on  them  all
wrap  their  pains  with  your  bright  shawl
stardust  drench  me  with  dreams  tonight
fill  this  heart  with  heavenly  lights



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Date--14th July 2013

Contest--STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE

By--kash poet

Octelle---the syllable count structure for this verse is:

 8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8

rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa... the first two lines and the last two lines are identical. 



© kash poet (kashinath karmakar)
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Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2014 at 6:53 PM It was so good to see you again, Kash, though you never answered my plea to post a new poem!!

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2013 at 11:09 PM Hi, Kash DO write a poem because you need a new one up!! thanks for reading my stuff, sweet friend.

Nette Onclaud July 29, 2013 at 11:15 AM soupy!..:)

Nette Onclaud July 28, 2013 at 3:16 PM arrrgh.. why you not writing any piece, kashi.. me wondering..:) huggs

Karen Anglesey July 28, 2013 at 10:13 AM Heavenly expression with a perfect rhyme scheme. Well done :)

Nette Onclaud July 26, 2013 at 8:02 PM where are you, kashi!..hugggs

Poet. Undertaker July 24, 2013 at 10:08 AM great kash.poems are really great.This one great. (:c Jenish

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2013 at 10:19 AM kashi.... are you in outer space?.. come home!..:) huggs

Juli- Michelle July 22, 2013 at 8:41 PM Its such a nice thought to picture being drenched in stardust. I love the imagery and symbolism, and I wonder how you came us with such beautiful verses. Love love love

Poet Destroyer A July 19, 2013 at 2:46 PM wow! Kash, I must had missed this contest.. I will look it up later tonight... a delightful and pretty poem... can I call it pretty... xox~ LINDA

Nette Onclaud July 19, 2013 at 2:08 PM beep, beep, kashi bud!... have a lovely weekend!..:)

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:21 PM Kash, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2013 at 3:00 PM yo, wake up... give me some of those gems!..:) huggs

Kim Merryman July 18, 2013 at 8:14 AM A stellar write, Kash! I really like this! Congrats on your win! I'm fav'ng this. Love, Kim

Ravi Sathasivam July 17, 2013 at 11:31 PM Excellent. Beautiful write. Congrats. Thanks for sharing with me. Tfs

Mustapha Mohammed July 17, 2013 at 11:07 PM Congrats on your win Kash.Comely imagery

Nette Onclaud July 17, 2013 at 6:11 PM just wanted to say " hi", kashi... :) huggs!

Carrie Richards July 17, 2013 at 3:52 PM "wrap their pains with this bright shawl"......oh, how I love this tender write! Wonderful, Kash! Congratulations once again!

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2013 at 4:43 PM Ahhh!!!Congrats on your creative and unique winning work..Sara

Charmaine Chircop July 16, 2013 at 2:21 PM Thos os almost like a prayer.Very beautiful.Defimitely sprinkled in my heart-peace and serenity-Charma

Victoria Anderson-Throop July 16, 2013 at 2:11 PM Kash, what a pity there isn't a place we can all meet on these nights....not in commiseration, but in fellowship! heartfelt write!

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2013 at 3:47 AM starry eyed am i, kashi... chunks of congrats on your greaat win in my contest... do check my blog!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2013 at 11:19 PM big congrats, my friend. Well deserved win. Soupmail.

Richard Lamoureux July 15, 2013 at 9:30 PM This is so good Kash. Congratulations

Nette Onclaud July 15, 2013 at 9:33 AM have a starry night, kashi... :) huggs

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