Stardust Drench Me
Stardust drench me with dreams tonight
fill this heart with heavenly lights
when the world is deep asleep
lonely hearts which love to weep
sprinkle your dreams on them all
wrap their pains with your bright shawl
stardust drench me with dreams tonight
fill this heart with heavenly lights
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Date--14th July 2013
Contest--STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE
By--kash poet
Octelle---the syllable count structure for this verse is:
8, 8, 7, 7, 7, 7, 8, 8
rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa... the first two lines and the last two lines are identical.
© kash poet (kashinath karmakar)
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Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2013
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