Debra Squyres Poet Couplet

Stardust Dreams

Not a cloud in the sky
And we weren’t feeling shy
In the back of the truck
Wishing on stars for good luck
We shared our dreams
With the moon’s beams
Cloaked by the night
Realities out of sight

Friendship shared for years
Knowing each other’s fears
Stardust blankets caught our tears
As new hope filled our ears
Time escapes all meaning
When two friends are dreaming

Debra Squyres
1/08/13

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Debbie Guzzi January 24, 2013 at 3:10 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2013 at 1:58 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Joyce Johnson January 23, 2013 at 7:53 PM Nice to see your name among the winning Debra. Great work. Love, Joyce

Noel Villarosa January 23, 2013 at 7:14 PM Congrats on this winning poem, Debra. (^_^).

Joseph May January 23, 2013 at 3:38 PM congrats on your win Debra

Audrey Haick January 23, 2013 at 12:48 PM Wow! My dear poet friend, in my eyes, this is deserving of a higher placement for sure! Nevertheless, congratulations on a beautiful poem in the Winners' Circle. Love, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 23, 2013 at 2:33 AM Congratulations Debra you have some terrific lines in this one, 2nd verse my favorite xx

Poet Destroyer A January 22, 2013 at 9:14 PM Debra. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA

Isaiah Zerbst January 12, 2013 at 12:45 PM The greatness of true friendship. You have really done it this time. Great rhymes!

Robert Johnson January 9, 2013 at 3:21 PM Louisiana moon beams shining sweet. Into the souls of two friends with one heart beat. A kindness hovers in the night. To let them know that all is right. New hope lives, new hope lives, when two friends know the other forgives. Keep dreamin' Debra.

Debbie Duncan January 9, 2013 at 10:20 AM Oh, I LOVE this,,,, awesome. " stardust blankets caught our tears" You have a blessed New Years and a blessed day ;}

Jay Loveless January 9, 2013 at 10:14 AM I love this and will have to share with my best friend. Im sure she will enjoy it as well...thank you so much for your comment im very glad you liked the write, and it means a lot to know it moved you so.

Lori Lucas Mcclure January 8, 2013 at 6:19 PM Enjoyed reading your work! ----Lori

Russell Sivey January 8, 2013 at 4:51 PM This is a very beautiful and glorious write Debra! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic and wonderful piece, Great Work!!