Stardust

Angels flapped their wings
Stardust fell from blessed sky
Poetry flourished!



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   21 OCTOBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bourne Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Flowing, beautiful composing....Look forward to reading more...Your PS friend...Gene.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Welcome my young friend! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a gentle way!
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October 22, 2014 at 4:07 PM
A wonderful Haiku here Demetrios!! So this is the source from whence "Poetry" flourished. It does make entire sense. So few words, but their force and power are quite obvious!! A "7" Sir. Your mastery of types writes along with the Epigrams is quite superb. I can tell you've done so much great writing over the years!! And, I've FAV'd this one too!! Cheers and Spill Ink!! Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Danke mein guter freund, Gary, for your visit and so generous comment and grading!
Nance Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 3:52 PM
wonderful! i love that image
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 7:22 AM
Thank you, Casarah, I am certain you do!
Sietesantos Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:56 PM
This is an absolutely magical write! Stardust is mystical and a touch is all we need to give birth to great poetry! Beautiful piece, Demetrios! Pandita
Trifiatis Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:59 PM
Welcome, Pandita! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:38 PM
I love it my friend...we can all use some stardust from time to time...cheers
Trifiatis Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Thank you , Tim, for liking it. I appreciate it!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 12:39 PM
The thoughts of beautiful stardust falling from an angels wings and blessing me with poetry is dreamy.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 1:19 PM
It is true my dear, Brenda, it is true! Enjoy it! Thank you for your kind visit!
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Thank you Demetrios, it beautiful write. :) eve
Trifiatis Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 1:17 PM
You are very welcome, Eve! Thank you for your visit and comment!
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