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Inspired by the contest of my dearest friend, Nette Onclaud.

Glistening rubbles in the sky, Huddling up and abound so high; Precious jewels in my sight, Touching you through dreams tonight. Cosmos most wondrous beauty, Artwork of God-Almighty. Glistening rubbles in the sky, Huddling up and abound so high. July 13, 2013 5.45 pm. Form: Octelle by: Leonora Galinta Sixth Place Contest: Stardust In An Octelle Judged: 7/14/13 Sponsor: Poet Nette Onclaud

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Shane Rundle

Date: 3/3/2015 10:44:00 PM

Hi Leonora, really enjoyed this verse, 'touching you through dreams tonight' loved this. Would love to hear what you think of my poem Still River. Until then happy writing and keep it up

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 8:20:00 PM

Hello Leonora, I'm sending you soup mail... hugs..Linda

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/19/2013 4:27:00 PM

very nice,, love the words ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2013 7:26:00 AM

reading this perfect write sweet sis... deep destination... when it comes to the value of the sky... sending you hugs and kisses... love love... thank you for everything.. I will take a nap, and wake up in 2 hours... love love....LINDA

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 7/21/2013 1:26:00 AM

If only I know how to paint..I will paint this amazing poem of your friend Leonora...Congratulations on your win...why you have only 2 days holiday? dont't worry next month another long holiday for us..keep up the good work..on your favorite hobbies...want to see your finished work :) God bless you with your great talents..hugs and kisses, Maria :)

Skat A

Date: 7/18/2013 10:22:00 PM

Hi Leonora, I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2013 8:26:00 PM

A wonderful poem Leo, artwork at it's best. a precious poem coming from your beautiful soul. I wish to have some of this star dust, poured upon me. Love the way you reach for God-Almighty, always... your sis... you are beautiful... love.. your loving sis... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2013 4:28:00 PM

Hi Lovely Leonora, thank you for painting a beautiful picture. love the glistening rubbles in the sky. uplifting. lovely you are. LUV~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2013 1:26:00 PM

Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2013 4:11:00 PM

oh and congrats!! I see it is a winner!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2013 4:10:00 PM

a gorgeous gem, my friend!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/16/2013 4:07:00 AM

uplifting ad simply divine, leonora.. sweet congrats on your shining win in my contest.. do check my blog!.:) huggs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/15/2013 9:25:00 PM

Congratulations, nice poem.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/15/2013 7:15:00 PM

Leonora hi and congrats super poem Shadow x smiles

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/15/2013 11:30:00 AM

This is so beautiful. I loved the line - Touching you through dreams tonight. That was a great line. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/15/2013 11:28:00 AM

Wonderful...wonderful poem! :) Very dreamy and romantic. Good luck on this, my dear. Yes...Soup mail for you!.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/15/2013 9:45:00 AM

stopping by to greet you after a while, lory... you and i, somehow, will find stsrdust of time on our side... stay well and thanks for your support... :) huggs

... Gigno

Date: 7/15/2013 12:14:00 AM

!!!

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/14/2013 4:39:00 PM

Good to read this shining piece Leonora, hope it does well in the contest..'

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/13/2013 11:53:00 PM

Wow This is a perfect entry! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a powerful enhancing piece my friend, what a delightful poem, Great Work!! PS my family has been in a major car accident a few nights ago and we have been dealing wit the pains of this! So please understand if I don't comment like I normally do, nor post poems like I normally do! Please pray for us and hope that everyone will get better quickly(even our dog)! Thanks!

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/13/2013 4:35:00 PM

Taking matters of the heart, above the skies. Wonderful lines!

Donna Jones

Date: 7/13/2013 2:34:00 PM

Stunning Leonora.....hope all is well.and your day is bright!

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/13/2013 11:14:00 AM

Beautiful image worded in to beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2013 6:47:00 AM

- Thank you for your beautiful Jewel, my dear Leonora. - Hope this is another new fabulous winning poem. - Crossing my fingers .... good luck!! - Have a beautiful and restful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2013 5:55:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your creative work..I know that Nette will like it..Sara