Stardust

As sun’s rays start to dissipate
the evening stars can hardly wait.
Bit by bit, their sparks of hope
rouse the night to broader scope.
Rubbing sleep from opened eyes
they cast stardust from the skies
as sun’s rays start to dissipate.
The evening stars can hardly wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Poulin Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 10:22 PM
You took a cold out there scope wide by billions of miles with a trillion stars and gave it person people quality with emotions, sprinkled stardust in the reader's eyes with the evening stars excited to come out as soon as the sun blinks out. You gave the Universe, the cosmos an emotion and I loved it so much, as I am learning to love your works enmass. KUDOS TO YOU AND YOUR CRAFT. BOB
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Linda this is perfect for Nette's contest. I know she'll love this. Warm Smiles, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:04 PM
wow. One of the best in the contest and it uses personification too. Awesome.
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