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Stardust

As sun’s rays start to dissipate the evening stars can hardly wait. Bit by bit, their sparks of hope rouse the night to broader scope. Rubbing sleep from opened eyes they cast stardust from the skies as sun’s rays start to dissipate. The evening stars can hardly wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/19/2013 10:22:00 PM
You took a cold out there scope wide by billions of miles with a trillion stars and gave it person people quality with emotions, sprinkled stardust in the reader's eyes with the evening stars excited to come out as soon as the sun blinks out. You gave the Universe, the cosmos an emotion and I loved it so much, as I am learning to love your works enmass. KUDOS TO YOU AND YOUR CRAFT. BOB
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Date: 7/10/2013 7:22:00 PM
Linda this is perfect for Nette's contest. I know she'll love this. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/10/2013 3:04:00 PM
wow. One of the best in the contest and it uses personification too. Awesome.
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