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Stardust

in farewell, we return to stardust specks, the cradle of our essence 



15th April 2023



Contest: Stardust Poetry Contest
Sponser: JCB Brul

17 syllables~

farewellmonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2023 at 4:05 PM

this is VERY good. Congrats for a top win.

Akanksha Ayantika

May 7, 2023 at 11:42 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I feel I can hear your emphasis. Thanks a lot:)

I Am Anaya

April 29, 2023 at 12:51 PM

Congratulations on your first placement Akanksha! We are stardust, we are golden specks.

Akanksha Ayantika

April 29, 2023 at 8:24 PM

Absolutely! Organic matter. Thank you!

Sotto Poet

April 29, 2023 at 11:22 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Akanksha Ayantika

April 29, 2023 at 8:32 PM

Thank you for your supportive words. With so dynamic a theme, we can wander in various paths. This one alluded the best to me.

Sam Kauffman

April 29, 2023 at 9:49 AM

Hi Akanksha, congratulations and high fives for your win with this poem that emphasizes so the wonder of stardust and a philosophical depth with poetic beauty. Wonderfully done. Blessings.

Akanksha Ayantika

April 29, 2023 at 10:31 AM

Thank you for your comment, Sam. You have got to the exact idea that I had in mind. The word 'stardust' can have many different meanings with changed perspectives.

Paula Goldsmith

April 29, 2023 at 9:48 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "stardust" is a powerful write. Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Akanksha Ayantika

April 29, 2023 at 10:36 AM

Thank you, Paula. The theme was so attractive, I think I can write several other poems about it.

Alexis Y.

April 29, 2023 at 5:29 AM

Hi Akanksha, You have penned such a deep one liner on the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Akanksha Ayantika

April 29, 2023 at 7:10 AM

Hi. Thank you very much for the congratulations and appreciating comment. I wish you a good day~