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Stardust

in farewell, we return to stardust specks, the cradle of our essence 



15th April 2023



Contest: Stardust Poetry Contest
Sponser: JCB Brul

17 syllables~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:05:00 PM

this is VERY good. Congrats for a top win.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 5/7/2023 11:42:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I feel I can hear your emphasis. Thanks a lot:)

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/29/2023 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your first placement Akanksha! We are stardust, we are golden specks.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/29/2023 8:24:00 PM

Absolutely! Organic matter. Thank you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2023 11:22:00 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/29/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thank you for your supportive words. With so dynamic a theme, we can wander in various paths. This one alluded the best to me.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2023 9:49:00 AM

Hi Akanksha, congratulations and high fives for your win with this poem that emphasizes so the wonder of stardust and a philosophical depth with poetic beauty. Wonderfully done. Blessings.

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/29/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thank you for your comment, Sam. You have got to the exact idea that I had in mind. The word 'stardust' can have many different meanings with changed perspectives.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "stardust" is a powerful write. Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/29/2023 10:36:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. The theme was so attractive, I think I can write several other poems about it.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 5:29:00 AM

Hi Akanksha, You have penned such a deep one liner on the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Akanksha Ayantika
Date: 4/29/2023 7:10:00 AM

Hi. Thank you very much for the congratulations and appreciating comment. I wish you a good day~