Stardust

Stardust

Stardust and raindrops crown the full moon with moonbows of star bright sparkle

4-14-23
Contest: Stardust
Sponsor:  JCB Brul
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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Back with my congrats on this gem!
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! What a fun theme to get lost in and explore the mystique of stardust! Blessings!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Dear Sam, Congratulations on your win. Your poems are always so special - be it a long spiritual, or a Monoku in few words. The pictures you paint with words are stunning, and dreamy. Dear Friend, do you have a magic pen? Love and hugs ~ Mala P.S. I am thrilled to know about our San Jose connection.
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:33 AM
Dearest Mala! Your notes of congratulations are gifts and I treasure them! The stardust theme was such fun to imagine and it is truly a delight to paint with words. Thank you for your lovely feedback! It seems to me that both of us have found a "magic pen" that paints beautiful pictures! I, too, am excited about our San Jose connection! Something to look forward to for the future! Take good care dear friend! Blessings and much love to you!
Gasun Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on your win and this fascinating monoku my dear poet friend Sam! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you and your writings. Hugs
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:08 AM
My dear friend Len, this was such a magical and mystical theme. So much fun to get caught up in the fantasy of stardust and moonbows! Thank you so much for your congratulatory note. Hope you are doing well! Be blessed my friend! Hugs!!!
Poet Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Sam, Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.
Kauffman Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Hi Lasaad! I am truly honored by your lovely feedback! It really put a big :) on my Monday face!!! Thank you for that gift and for the gift of these beautiful words of compliment! So grateful! Stardust and moonbows are truly magical blessings of Mother Nature! Sending you blessings.
Buehler Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:12 AM
What lovely images! Congratulations on your win, Sam. :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thank you so much Evelyn! This was an enchanting theme that brought out so many wonderful monokus! It is an honor to be on the winners list. So glad you enjoyed this foray into the enchantment of stardust and moonbows! Blessings my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:55 AM
Congratulations on your win. A bright sparkle of a Monoku write. Hooray!!! Have a great/blessed weekend.............
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Paula, thank you so much. Writing this was a journey into the magical and mysterious realm of stardust. Wonderful theme!!! A blessing to be on the winners list with so many delightful poems. Blessings for your day!
Y. Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 5:38 AM
Hi Sam, You created a lovely picture in a few words. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Hi Alexis! Stardust and moonbows really captured my imagination. Thank you for your lovely feedback. I so appreciate your note of congratulations! Have a wonderful weekend! Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 2:46 AM
- Congratulations on your sparkling win, Sam :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise! I just love the way starlight brings a mystical magic to the night sky and I loved learning about "moonbows!" Hugs and blessings!
Daniel Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 12:46 AM
Wow! So ethereal, Sam! Congratulations:)
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Hi Jo! Many thanks for your lovely compliment and your note of congratulations! Stars truly are magical creations!!! Blessings!
Seeker Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Superbo! This one will be difficult to beat :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Hi Seeker! Thank you so much. So much fun to think about how much joy watching the stars brings us and discovering "moonbows!" Blessings my friend!
Peck Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 8:52 PM
Beautiful, Sam! Best of luck!
Kauffman Avatar
April 18, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much Ann. It is a wonderful theme that is inspiring so many wonderful poems. Easter season blessings to you!
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Very pretty. One I need to get working on!!
Kauffman Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 12:18 PM
Andrea, thank you! Can't wait to read your entry! I know it will be wonderful! Blessings!
Sands Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:22 PM
Beautiful , stunning monoku Sam . I love it. :)
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:28 PM
Hi Heidi! Thank you! Your lovely message is like the awe I feel stargazing on a clear night. So grateful for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed this journey into stardust! Hope you are doing well! Blessings!
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:18 PM
So much more picturesque than my one Sam, what a beautiful Monoku you’ve created here, a great one for the contest cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:33 PM
You’re so nice and kind Sam, thank you!
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:25 PM
Hi David! Many thanks coming your way! This was an enchanting theme. I am grateful for your "sparkling" feedback. While mine is an observation, yours has a depth and wisdom in its words that take it into a whole different realm and new poetic heights! Thank you for inspiring me. Cheers!
Y. Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Wow! Sam, You said so much in a few words. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-)Alexis
Kauffman Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Thank you so much Alexis! Had such fun with this theme and I really enjoy writing monokus! Thanks for sharing in the stargazing! Have a wonderful weekend! Blessings of the Easter season to you!!
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